Saturday, June 19, 2010

Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

Personal Statement 閳?Kadie Bark



My name is Kadie Bark, I'm 15 years old and i am currently attending The Sheffield Springs Academy. I'm a pretty friendly, kind and patient person, and i am known to be bubbly and sociable, also i find it very easy to get on with people. I have a range of skills including:



Numeracy



Literacy



Computers



My creative instincts



I'm practical



Hard working



Dependable



I'm quick learner



I'd say that my biggest strength was probably creative writing/writing to describe as this is the area that i do better in and i enjoy the most.



My punctuality and attendance has been a little sketchy in the past, but over the past six months or so it has improved greatly and i aim to improve it even more.



I have a pretty good relationship with teachers and pupils. I get along with most pupils in our school and have never had any trouble in the past. I think my teachers would agree that i am a sensible student who at times can get a little distracted, but is dedicated to completing work/tasks.



My favourite subject in school would have to be English, as i enjoy writing, especially creative, and i love to read also. Another subject that i enjoy is Art, as i like learning new techniques and applying what i have learned to a piece of work.



I have been on a few school trips before, the main one being when a small group of pupils went on a trip to France, Normandy. While we were there we looked into the historical aspects of the city by visiting famous landmarks, such as the Bayeux War Cemetery. I have also taken part in school events such as the annual sports day.



While i was taking part in work experience, my job title was 'Nursery Assistant', the tasks which i had to fulfil include watching out for the children's safety at all times, making sure they were never bored and always had something productive to do and helping them settle down if they became upset, etc. The skills i gained from this experience are valuable life skills which will come in very handy in the future. I learned how to act around children, what to do in certain situations. For example if a child was misbehaving, they would have to apologise and have a five minute time out before rejoining the other children.



I think my relationship with both the children and staff was pretty good. The staff never had a problem with how i was working and at the end of my work experience they thanked me for doing such a great job. Also the children were sad to see me leave.



I did not actually get invited back to work at the nursery as if i was to have a official staff position there i would need to have some qualifications. And although i enjoyed my work experience, i don't think i will pursue working in a nursery as a career option.



When i am not at school there are a number of different things that i like to do including hanging out with friends, going to the Cinemas, going Bowling, Skating, making promotional graphics for websites, talking to friends on msn, moderating and posting in forums, etc.



I recently had a part time (Saturday) job at a hair salon, sweeping hair up, making tea, washing the customers hair, but i stepped down as i wanted to spend more time on coursework/revision.



My favourite way to spend my free time would be hanging out, and talking to friends as i feel it is very important to have a healthy social life.



I am also pretty into books and reading. My favourite book is Guitar Girl by Sarra Manning as i like her quick and witty style of writing. I also enjoy books from Meg Cabot as she has a similar style of writing. The books that i read are mainly teen oriented, but i do like to read other books now and again.



In the future i plan on going to college and taking part in a full time English Literature course and English Language course. Other courses i am interested in taking are Photography, Music, I.T and Health and Social Care.



I have not really made any ambitions yet as i am still trying to work out which career path i want to take.



My hopes for the future are that i will have figured out what i want to do in life, and i will have passed all of my chosen courses and i will be happily settled in a well paid job.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

Hi Kadie, you've done a fantastic job, you are honest and believable and seem very genuine. Like eiremanne says, I would change the bit that says hanging out, there are 2 other things I would change - firstly, don't say 'I have not really made any ambitions yet', I would just take that bit out,and delete the word 'pretty' all the way through - just say you are good at things, it reads better that way. Other than that, its really great, well done! Best of luck.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

HI Kadie,



This is fantastic, you are certainly very creative in your writing when i left school my personal statement consisted of "I want to have "a nice husband And 4 Kids" Lol.



The only thing i would change would be the wording "Hanging out with my friends" to something like socialising with my friends as hanging out sounds like standing on street corners!



Good luck with your future



Jens XxX



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

Yes it's pretty good: but probably leave out the bit about "sketchy punctuality" if you don't need to say it why bother.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

I am delighted you did not go for a writing style that is terse nor stark. You have developed your thoughts well and manage the language very well, indeed. You are clearly going to be an asset to the world here at some point, and I am not making fun. Thank you very much for posting your personal statement. It hardly needs to be corrected. What needs to happen is all of your teachers need to be given a great big hug for having done so well by you! Best to you, always. - Chris.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

I didn't read all of it, but if you're wanting to use this to apply to college, I would make one MAJOR change.



The word "I" is ALWAYS capitalized, it should never be lowercase. Hope it helps.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

Your ambition should take you through. I wish you the very best of luck. You probably wont need it.



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

this is a good statement. rather than listing the skills that you have try and fit them into sentences somehow. try and rewrite the last lines from 'i have not really...' as many people might think that because of this you are not going to put as much effort into college, than if you did have ambitions and knew where you were heading in life



hope this helps



Is this ok for a personal statement, i am in year 11 and just about to go to college?

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Do n e of you know any Sad poems or story thingys like the one i have below??

Once on a yellow piece of paper with green lines he wrote a poem And he called it "Chops" because that was the name of his dog And thats what it was all about And his teacher gave him an A and a gold star And his mother hung it on the kitchen door and read it to his aunts That was the year Father Tracy took all the kids to the zoo And he let them sing on the bus And his little sister was born with tiny toenails and no hair And his mother and father kissed a lot And the girl around the corner sent him a Valentine and signed with a row of X's and he had to ask his father what the X's meant And his father always tucked him in bed at night And was always there to do it



Once on a piece of white paper with blue lines he wrote a poem And he called it "Autumn" because that was the name of the season And that's what it was all about And his teacher gave him an A and asked him to write more clearly And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door because of its new paint And the kids told him that Father Tracy smoked cigars And left butts on the pews And sometimes they would burn holes That was the year his siter got glasses with thick lenses and black frames And the girl around the corner laughed when he asked her to go see Santa Claus And the kids told him why his mother and father kissed a lot And his father never tucked him in bed at night And his father got mad when he cried for him to do it



Once on a piece of paper torn from his notebook he wrote a poem And he called it "Innocence: A Question" because that was the question about his girl And that's what it was all about And his professor gave him an A and a strange steady look And his mother never hung it on the kitchen door because he never showed her That was the year that Father Tracy died And he forgot how the end of the Apostle's Creed went And he caught his sister making out on the back porch And his mother and father never kissed or even talked And the little girl around the corner wore too much makeup That made him cough when he kissed her but he kissed her anyway because that was the thing to do And at three A.M he tucked himself into bed his father snoring soundly



That's why on the back of a brown paper bag he tried another poem And he called it "Absolutely Nothing" Because that's what it was really all about And he gave himself an A and a slash on each damned wrist And he hung it on the bathroom door because this time he didn't think he could reach the kitchen



Do n e of you know any Sad poems or story thingys like the one i have below??

aah Wallflower! I love that poem!!! here's one I love- It's called Richard Cory (Simon and Garfunkel actually made a song from it)



Richard Cory



E.A. Robinson



Whenever Richard Cory went down town,



We people on the pavement looked at him:



He was a gentleman from head to crown,



Clean favored, and imperially slim.



And he was always quietly arrayed,



And he was always human when he talked;



But he still fluttered pulses when he said,



"Good-morning," and he glittered when he walked.



And he was rich--yes, richer than a king--



and admirably schooled in every grace:



In fine, we thought that he was everything



To make us wish that we were in his place.



So on we worked, and waited for the light



And we went without meat, and cursed the bread;



And Richard Cory, one calm summer night,



Went home and put a bullet through his head.



or anything by Edgar Allen Poe



Do n e of you know any Sad poems or story thingys like the one i have below??

wow that is sad and know i dont know any like that and dont think i want to



Do n e of you know any Sad poems or story thingys like the one i have below??

That's some nice writing.



A) Reminds me of Aesop Fables @



http://www.pacificnet.net/~johnr/aesop/



Do n e of you know any Sad poems or story thingys like the one i have below??

Wow what a tragically beautiful poem, I don't know any like that but you could try googling "sad poems" that might help. Good luck!

Questions and answers?

Q. How do you make a blonde laugh on Saturday?



A. Tell her a joke on Wednesday.



Q. How do you confuse a blonde?



A. You can鈥檛, they have always been like that.



Q: Why did the blonde scale the chain-link fence?



A: To see what was on the other side.



Q. How do you amuse a blonde for hours?



A. Write 鈥楶lease turn over鈥?on both sides of a piece of paper.



Q. What do twenty blondes standing ear to ear make?



A. A wind tunnel.



Q. How do you confuse a blonde?



A. Put them in a round room and tell them to sit in the corner.



Q. How does a blonde try to kill a fish?



A. She drowns it.



Q. What did the blonde鈥檚 left leg say to her right leg?



A. Between the two of us, we can make a lot of money.



Q. How does a blonde part their hair?



A. By doing the splits.



Q. What did the blondes right leg say to the left leg?



A. Nothing, they haven鈥檛 met!



Q. A blonde is going to London on a plane. How can you steal her window seat?



A. Tell her the seats that are going to London are all in the middle row.



Q. Why do blondes wash their hair in the sink?



A. Because that鈥檚 where your supposed to wash vegetables.



Q. What鈥檚 a blondes favorite nursery rhyme?



A. Humpme Dumpme



Q. Why did the blonde like the car with a sunroof?



A. More leg-room!



Q. Why don鈥檛 blondes use vibrators?



A. They chip their teeth.



Q. How does a blonde like her eggs in the morning?



A. Fertilized



Q. Why do blondes like tilt steering?



A. More headroom



Q. Why is a blonde like a doorknob?



A. Because everyone gets a turn.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and a bowling ball?



A. You can only fit 3 fingers in a bowling ball.



Q. What does a screen door and a blonde have in common?



A. The more you bang it, the looser it gets!



Q. What do you call 20 blondes in a freezer?



A. Frosted Flakes



Q. What do you call a dumb blonde behind a steering wheel?



A. An airbag.



Q. How can you tell a blonde has had a bad day?



A. She has a tampon tucked under her ear and she can鈥檛 find her pencil.



Q. What does the Bermuda Triangle and a blonde have in common?



A. They both swallowed a lot of semen.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and an ironing board?



A. Its difficult to open the legs on an ironing board.



Q. How did the blonde burn her nose?



A. Bobbing for chips.



Q. What do you call a zit on a blondes ***?



A. Brain tumor.



Q. Why does a blonde insist on him wearing a condom?



A. So she can have a doggie bag for later.



Q. How would a blonde punctuate the following: 鈥淔un fun fun worry worry worry鈥?br> A. Fun period fun period fun no period worry worry worry鈥?



Q. What does a blonde say after multiple orgasms?



A. 鈥淲ay to go team!鈥?br>



Q. What do you call a blonde with a runny nose?



A. FULL



Q. What happened to the blonde tap dancer?



A. She slipped off and fell down the drain.



Q. Why did the deaf blonde sit on the newspaper?



A. So she could lip read.



Q. Why is it good to have a blonde passenger?



A. You get to park in the handicap zone.



Q. What do you call a blonde with 2 brain cells?



A. Pregnant.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and a 747?



A. Not everyone has been in a 747.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between butter and a blonde?



A. Butter is difficult to spread.



Q. What do you do if a blonde throws a grenade at you?



A. Pull the pin and throw it back.



Q. What do you call it when a blonde dies her hair brunette?



A. Artificial intelligence.



Q. What do you call a blonde standing on her head?



A. A brunette with bad breath.



Q. What do blondes and cow poop have in common?



A. The older they get, the easier they are to pick up.



Q. How does a blond turn on the light after sex?



A. She opens the car door.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and a mosquito?



A. When you smack the mosquito it stops sucking!!



Q. What does a blonde say when you ask her what the last two words of the national anthem are?



A. Play ball!



Q. What do smart blondes and UFO鈥檚 have in common?



A. You always hear about them but never see them.



Q. Why did the blonde stare at the can of frozen orange juice?



A. Cause it said concentrate.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and the Titanic?



A. They know how many went down on the Titanic.



Q. How can you tell if a blonde has been using your computer?



A. The joystick is wet.



Q: How can you tell if a blonde鈥檚 been using the computer?



A: There鈥檚 white-out on the screen.



Q. Why do blondes wear underwear?



A. To keep their ankles warm.



Q. What is a brunette between two blondes?



A. An interpreter.



Q. What鈥檚 the difference between a blonde and a brick?



A. The brick doesn鈥檛 follow you home after you lay it.



Q. Did you hear about the blonde that needed gas money?



A. She sold her car for it鈥?br>



Q. What did the blonde say when she found out she was pregnant?



A. 鈥淎re you sure it鈥檚 mine?鈥?br>



Q. Why do blondes have bruised belly buttons?



A. Because they have blond boyfriends



Q. What do blondes and beer bottles have in common?



A. Their both empty from the neck up



Q. What do you call a blond with a brain?



A. A golden retriever.



Q. What do you call a blonde in the closet?



A. The 1984 hide and go seek champion.



Q. How can you tell that a blonde sent you a fax?



A. It has a stamp on it.



Q. What do you call a room full of blondes with PMS and yeast infections?



A. A wine and cheese party!



Q. How do you drown a blonde?



A. Put a scratch 鈥榥 sniff sticker at the bottom of a pool.



Q. Hear about the blonde that bought an AM radio?



A. It took her a month to figure out she could play it at night too.



Q. What did the blonde say when she saw the banana peel on the floor?



A. Oh no, I鈥檓 going to fall again!



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What can I say, brillant as always..you always give me a good start in the mornings..lol



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These poor blondes get all the stick.



Like them all



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I don't get it!!!!!!!



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dats kinda wrong sum of it wus funni but wrong give the blondes a break



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Some of those jokes I really didn't like, but others were funny. I don't really understand the point of them but nice job...



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wicked haha



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And this will keep me entertained for days, weeks maybe! HA HA! Very good. But I'm just a dirty blonde .heh heh...



I actually do have a key chain that says : how do you keep an idiot (instead of blonde) busy for hours. Turn this over.



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Thoes are just to cute!



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You have a wicked sense of humour. I like them all. It's at times like these I am glad I am not blonde. hahaha 搂



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do you really think blondes are really stupid?????



you need to learn to think clearly... i am the smartest gal in my school and i have sandy blonde hair with blue eyes \



:P



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hahahahaaa they were funny, well done for making me laugh....lol



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Hahahhahahaaaaa, who ever said blondes have more fun hahahaaa



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Nice ones!



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Lmao they were good ones, heres a star for ya



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Are you sure it only took 1000 characters??? Anyway...they were great!



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OMG! Hilarous! I like the "how do you drowned a blonde? put a scrath-n-sniff on the bottom of the pool!"



That was good! Good job, I liked them all, but you posted a lot of blonde jokes that were already posted, but they were still funny a second time!



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Coo....blimey. What wit. You certainly brighten up a day!



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Blondes ,,ha ha ha v good reading ha ha ha



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some quality ones there sbc



star



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oh oh dont know about them............blondes aren't 'slappers' you know, think these are more Essex girl jokes..................



pmsl



hahahahahah



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hehehe you on a roll hun, keep them comming



have a star



xxxxxxxxxxxxx



come on pepzi time to get your own back i think



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LOLOL I'm glad to see you've gotten a great source for the jokes mate, Keep it up



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what have you got against blondes, blondes are pretty, sweet, intelligent, excellent in all aspects if life.



Jealousy will get you nowhere!!!!!!! LOL LOL



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:-)



jk, :-D!



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Some were very funny :D



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ha ha funny.



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lol



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FUNNY !!!



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wow! It was like doing the marathon! =D

Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Personal Statement 閳?Kadie Bark



My name Is Kadie Bark, I'm 15 years old and I am currently attending The Sheffield Springs Academy. I'm a friendly, kind and patient person, and I am known to be bubbly and sociable, also I find it very easy to get on with people. I have a range of skills including:



Numeracy



Literacy



Computers



My creative instincts



I'm practical



Hard working



Dependable



I'm a quick learner



I'd say that my biggest strength was probably creative writing/writing to describe as this Is the area that I do better In and I enjoy the most.



My punctuality and attendance has generally been good, but over the past six months or so It has improved greatly and I aim to improve It even more.



I have a really good relationship with teachers and pupils. I get along with most pupils in our school and have never had any trouble In the past. I think my teachers would agree that I am a sensible student who at times can get a little distracted, but is dedicated to completing work/tasks.



My favourite subject In school would have to be English, as I enjoy writing, especially creative, and I love to read also. Another subject that I enjoy is Art, as I like learning new techniques and applying what I have learned to a piece of work.



I have been on a few school trips before, the main one being when a small group of pupils went on a trip to France, Normandy. While we were there we looked into the historical aspects of the city by visiting famous landmarks, such as the Bayeux War Cemetery. I have also taken part In school events such as the annual sports day.



While I was participating In work experience, my job title was 'Nursery Assistant', the tasks which I had to fulfil include watching out for the children's safety at all times, making sure they were never bored and always had something productive to do and helping them settle down If they became upset, etc. The skills I gained from this experience are valuable life skills which will come In very handy In the future. I learned how to act around children, what to do In certain situations. For example If a child was misbehaving, they would have to apologise and have a five minute time out before rejoining the other children.



I think my relationship with both the children and staff was great. The staff never had a problem with how I was working and at the end of my work experience they thanked me for doing such a great job. Also the children were sad to see me leave.



I did not actually get invited back to work at the nursery as If I was to have an official staff position there I would need to have some qualifications. And although I enjoyed my work experience, I don't think I will pursue working In a nursery as a career option.



When I am not at school there are a number of different things that I like to do including socialising with friends, going to the Cinemas, going Bowling, Skating, making promotional graphics for websites, talking to friends online, moderating and posting In forums, etc.



I recently had a part time (Saturday) job at a hair salon, sweeping hair up, making tea, washing the customers hair, but I stepped down as I wanted to spend more time on coursework/revision.



My favourite pass time would probably be socializing, and talking to friends as I feel It Is very important to have a healthy social life.



I am also interested In books and reading. My favourite book Is Guitar Girl by Sarra Manning as I like her quick and witty style of writing. I also enjoy books from Meg Cabot as she has a similar style of writing. The books that I read are mainly teen oriented, but I do like to read other books now and again.



In the future I plan on going to college and taking part in a full time English Literature course and English Language course. Other courses I am interested In taking are Photography, Music, I.T and Health and Social Care.



I have not really made any ambitions yet as I am still trying to work out which career path I want to take. But as I said I am interested in writing, so I may explore that further and pursue a career In that area.



My hopes for the future are that I will have figured out what I want to do In life, and I will have passed all of my chosen courses and I will be happily settled In a well paid job.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Seems pretty good. I wish you would have censored the personal info before posting.



I noticed fulfill seems to be spelled wrong, is the way you have it correct for Canada/UK?



White space also makes things easier to read.



Try to identify some of the longer sentences and make them more bite-sized. People read shorter sentences more thoroughly.



Be more confident in what you say. Try seeing how any sentence with "I think" in it sounds if you remove that phrase.



Do you have to incriminate yourself? I know it's good to be humble, but you really should be tooting your own horn here. Obviously you can't overinflate achievements, but don't call yourself distracted (for example).



Even though I used a parenthetical statement above, don't do it in your submission. It's kind of like saying "ignore the part in parentheses."



Rather than saying that you haven't made a choice yet, I'd just say you are open to several career possibilities if you agree with that.



BTW, everybody wants to pass their classes and be paid well, I don't know if that's worth mentioning.



When you look to the future, don't focus on what you can get, focus on what you hope to contribute.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Everything I read in your Testimonial made sense %26amp; it is well written



Best of look with your future



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

To be honest I think it is a bit long. There are a lot of bits in it that I would leave out particularly those referring to your admitted lack of attendance! And also the part about how you can be easily distracted. You have to sell yourself and make whoever reads it want to have you at their college.



Instead of talking about what you like to do in your spare time tell them why you want to do the course you are applying for. What made you choose it? Have you done anything in that area before?



Keep what you do in your spare time to a few short lines towards the end. They don't want a total bore after all who does not participate in any clubs etc.



Overall though, it is great the way you have listed your good qualities and the life experiences you have. Just a few little amendments here and there and I think you will have a winner :)



Remember the person reading it will be reading several hundred others so make it short, sweet and to the point. You need to gain their attention with the first few lines.



Wish you lots of luck - you will be great I'm sure :)



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Excellent! A couple of suggestions:



Get rid of capital letters in words like art, cinemas, bowling, skating, photography, etc.



Went on a trip to Normandy, France.



...washing customers' hair...



"I have not really made any ambitions..." - change to "any firm plans" or something similar.



Best of luck in the future!



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Hell no. If you make a list in writing a statement or essay, GAME OVER!!!



Anyway, I would suggest you run spell-check on that, there are many grammar errors. Looking at your usage of "favourite" and that you took a "little" trip to France, am I correct in assuming you're British?



Also, in the personal interests paragraph, do not capitalize anything, and it's "pastime". Especially if your said "biggest strength was probably creative writing/writing to describe as this Is the area that I do better In", don't make any mistake in grammar or things like that, I see multiple errors in that sentence alone.



Also in formatting, use justify to make the statement look nice.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

I'm in Year 11 too! Brighton UK ...........



and I think that is is really good.



Mine isn't that long but I've already done it .



Looks good to me.



Good Luck with that. I had to do mine twice.



I think it is a bit too long.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Man that is long. Probably the main prob. do not put computers put using computers. Just say your attendance is good. don't give them any doubt that your attendance is bad. There are a few other things. Just read through it carefully and adjust things. keep it simple and cut out anything that is not totally necessary.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

Cut out anything where you admit weakness, especially the distracted part. Although it makes you sound like a nice person, bubbly has connotations of someone who doesn't know how to shut up and being an airhead, even though you come across as quite intelligent through the rest of the statement, so you might want to remove bubbly and just have sociable. You have to appear confident, but not cocky, so admitting bad points in statements is generally a bad idea.



It's too long, unimportant bits such as the trips you've been on and some of the details on your work experience could be removed too.



Go over the grammar, especially if you're using writing as your main hobby. Your spelling seems fairly good, but always double check it. I'd suggest using the spelling checker in Microsoft Word, if you don't have it at home your school should have it installed. I used to do a lot of writing myself, so I know that people rarely notice their own mistakes and keep making them, myself included.



It might be an idea to see what your teachers have put on your written references if your school sends them out, so you can work around it. Some places will also have people to help you write the statements and check them for you, though that tends to be colleges more than schools I think.



Good luck from someone who's also in the middle of writing his personal statement and also applying for English Language. If I can help any more, click on my name to IM or e-mail me.



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

You need to cut it down. Keep to your strengths and things that will make you sound attractive to the college. You don't want them to get bored reading it. A college will probably be impressed that you actually have taken the time and made the effort to write a personal statement whatever!



Is this ok for a personal statement? I'm in year 11 and applying for college soon.?

You know, for your age i think that is very well written. A lot of people here and their answers are expecting too much from you i'd say but if your going to change anything then i wouldnt change it too much, possibly shorten it though. You didnt mention when you were thinkning of starting college? I realise its no time soon as u haven't put any courses down.

Whats it for?

I don't mean to be disrespectful, but what is the purpose of the crocheted piece of material that many female apostolics and the like wear in their hair? (didnt want to call it a doile) is there a specific meaning for wearing it?



Whats it for?

Modesty...its in the bible somewhere and someone posted a question about that a long time ago...maybe u can do a search on similar questions.



Whats it for?

A mantilla



Used by women to cover the head to show respect in church.



I had to wear one at my confirmation, stupid looking thing.



Only ever see old women with them these day, where I'm from anyways.

Intense pulsed light effect on metal inside human body?

since there is a piece of metal planted inside big toe just wondeing whether can go for hair removal using intense pulsed light.



Intense pulsed light effect on metal inside human body?

I think you should ask your doctor or the person performing the service

What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Yesterday we were @ the mall. You know they have the little kiosks and people always want to bring you to theirs and show you their products. This lady had some special curling/flat irons. I decided to let her do my daughter's hair because she has curly hair and we had been looking for a flat iron. She went to do the first piece and my daughter jumped. At first I thought she might just be scared, she gets that way sometimes, or it was getting to warm on her ear. Well when the lady was done with a few strands and I went on to the next store I decided to check her ear. It was red, warm, %26amp; looked like it was blistering. I checked it this morning and it's blistered. She said it doesn't really hurt, but I'm a little pissed off. Burns don't really blister right away, right? Unless they're bad



What do/can I do? Her dad is pissed @ me for not doing anything yesterday, but it wasn't all blistered yesterday. The big thing is that the chick just brushed it off like she didn't do anything.



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Tell the manager so that it doesn't happen again... but honestly, anything more seems like an overreaction. This isn't something that's likely to cause permanent damage... and are you honestly going to spend your time filing a small claims suit? It's a waste of time and money. Call the manager and get your daughter some burn cream.



And don't let strangers who aren't actual hairdressers use hot tools on your kid.



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Too late now. If your daughter is alright, live and learn!



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Get photos, see doctor, find out who it was.



File a complaint in small claims court.



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

If it was my daughter I would go back that sounds like a second degree burn to me!!!



Go back and talk to her manager that should not have happened!!!!!!



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

contact the manager of the kiosk. make sure your daughter has an input in the situation. tell dad to cool it and help out with this situation. take pictures as well. that lady should be more careful, seriously.



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Wow, it was an accident....you said yourself that your daughter jumped, so it was basically your daughter's own fault. I would say that the only thing you could do would be to get your money back, but you didn't pay anything.



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

You're daughter jumped, so it's not her fault! It was an innocent accident. How old is your daughter??? I wouldn't have let some stranger go near my child with a hot iron for the purpose of trying to sell me something. I would leave it alone and learn from your mistake. She did not claim to be a professional, she was merely a salesperson. Even if she were, accidents happen. It's not life threatening even though it pisses you off, it will heal. Take care!



What do/can I do about this? Lady burnt my daughter's ear?

Just let it go. It's not a big deal. It'll heal up and go away.