Saturday, November 28, 2009

Whats this product called and where can i get it?

My boyfriends in his early thirthies and he can grow a beard, but if he want to grow out a goatte he cant because theirs a small are next to his lip that wont grow hair... but i saw this stuff along time ago on the Home Shopping Network that was like a cream, and its supposed to make your facial hair grow... like for when you have short eyelashes, or accidentaly wax off piece of your eyebrow... does anyone know what i'm talking about, or anything that can help.



Whats this product called and where can i get it?

lol, that stuff never works



Whats this product called and where can i get it?

i have no idea wat that thing is. But u happen to know le me know ya.



Whats this product called and where can i get it?

Here is the contact page for Home Shopping Network...You can either email them or call their 800 number and I am sure that someone there can help you find what you are looking for and take your order for it all at the same time !!



Hope this helps and Good Luck ~~



http://www.hsn.com/cs/default.aspx?cm_sp...

Why does a living organism have different types of cells?

Your body is made of about 10 trillion cells. The largest human cells are about the diameter of a human hair, but most human cells are smaller -- perhaps one-tenth of the diameter of a human hair.



Run your fingers through your hair now and look at a single strand. It is not very thick -- maybe 100 microns in diameter (a micron is a millionth of a meter, so 100 microns is a tenth of a millimeter). A typical human cell might be one-tenth of the diameter of your hair (10 microns). Look down at your little toe -- it might represent 2 or 3 billion cells or so, depending on how big you are. Imagine a whole house filled with baby peas. If the house is your little toe, the peas are the cells. That's a lot of cells!



At a microscopic level, we are all composed of cells. Look in a mirror -- what you see is about 10 trillion cells divided into about 200 different types of cells. Our muscles are made of muscle cells, our livers of liver cells, and there are even very specialized types of cells that make the enamel for our teeth or the clear lenses in our eyes!



If you want to understand how your body works, you need to understand cells. Everything from reproduction to infections to repairing a broken bone happens down at the cellular level. If you want to understand new frontiers like biotechnology and genetic engineering, you need to understand cells as well.



Quick Review



All life is made of cells.



Most scientists divide life into 5 separate kingdoms (Plants, Animals, Protists, Moneran, %26amp; Fungi) based on their similarities and differences.



Some life forms are very simple and made of only one cell (Moneran, Protists, some Fungi).



Other life forms (Animals, Plants, some Fungi) are made of many cells that work together



In the last lesson we saw what most cells have in common. When you hear the word cells or study cells you can put a picture in your mind of what a cell looks like. You are familiar with the basic parts of all cells, like a cell membrane, the nucleus, and the mitochondria.



In this lesson, our purpose is to see how cells are different. We call this cell differentiation. In the nucleus of each cell you will find small structures called chromosomes. These hold the plan, like a set of blueprints, which decides what a cell will look like and what its job will be.



A maple tree is an example of a complex organism. It has many cells, but some of the tons of cells do one job, while some of the tons of cells do another job. That is why if I handed you a piece of a maple tree you could tell right away if it was a piece of bark, root, or a leaf.



Each of those parts are made of cells. Each type of cell (leaf cells, bark cells, etc.) has a special task to do so the tree can survive. The leaf gathers sunlight to make food for the tree, but obviously the roots, being underground, away from the sun, don鈥檛 do the same job. They bring water to the leaves and anchor the tree in place. A leaf cell can only make more leaf cells and a bark cell can only make more bark cells.



All types of complex organisms have different cells to do different jobs. To better understand cell differentiation we are going use an example with which you are very familiar --- your body.



FUN FACT: All cells are 90% water.



How are Cells organized?



Every living thing is made of separate cells. They can do their specific job, and work together.



Cells in your body are organized like a school district is organized. In a school there are levels of organization. Students are organized into classes. Classes are organized into grade levels. Grade levels are organized into schools. Schools are organized into a school district.



Life forms have a similar arrangement. Individual cells join together to form tissue, like muscle tissue, bone tissue, or skin tissue. Tissues join together to form organs, like your lungs, your brain, or your intestines. Organs join together to form a whole body system, like the skeletal system, nervous system, or the digestive system. All the body systems join to form the organism.



Comparing cells to schools would look something like this:



Example in a person



Level of organization in a person



Level of organization in a school



Muscle cell



Cell



Student



Muscle tissues



Tissues



Classes



Heart muscle



Organs



Grade Levels



Circulatory System



Organ Systems



Schools



Person



Organism



School District



Let鈥檚 Get Moving!



What happens when you run, jump, swim, just tap you fingers on the desk, or even yawn? Muscles help your body do these actions. Plants don鈥檛 move around so they don鈥檛 need muscle tissue which is made of muscle cells. These long stringy fibers can pull together and then relax. When a muscle cell in your body contracts, it is using energy to move some part of you. You know muscle cells in your arms are working when you pick up a heavy box. But they鈥檙e even busy extending and contracting when you smile, frown, breathe, or laugh.



Your heart muscle cells NEVER get a break, keeping your heart beating even when you are asleep.



ONLY SKIN DEEP??



Plants have a layer of outer cells to protect what鈥檚 inside, just like that plastic sandwich bag protects your bologna and cheese sandwich. You have a protective layer, too --- your skin cells. Touch your hand and you鈥檙e touching many thousands of skin cells. All of your outer cells (the ones you can touch) are dead. But just underneath this surface are neat rows of living skin cells.



Squeezed in between those skin cells are other types of cells; nerve cells, which allow you to feel things; fat cells that keep you warm; and capillary cells that make sure all the cells are supplied with oxygen and nutrients from your bloodstream. Skin cells are shaped a little like building blocks, all fitting neatly together and holding all of you together.



The Eyes Have It



Your eyes have nerve cells that turn light into electrical impulses and then send them to your brain. Cone shaped cells pick up bright lights and colors and rod-shaped cells respond to dimmer signals. The retina of your eye contains about 137 million light-sensitive cells in an area about one square inch. There are 130 million rod shaped cells for black and white vision and 7 million cone cells for color vision. Dogs also have special light sensitive cells called cones, which are needed for color vision. However dogs don鈥檛 have as many cones, or as many types of cones, as people do. Dogs see greenish-blue colors as white or grey. They can tell the difference between blues and reds, but confuse colors ranging between greenish yellow and red. This means your dog may have a hard time spotting a red ball on a green lawn.



Bone Cells %26amp; Fat Cells



Bone cells aren鈥檛 all hard and brittle, like you might think. Like your other cells, they are soft and surrounded by membranes. But these cells need calcium and are grouped to form bony tissue. Without our bony skeleton to hold us up, we鈥檇 sink to the ground in a big heap.



Fat Cells look like a bunch of bubbles. They store energy and help insulate the body from cold. When you eat more calories than your body can use that day, your body stores that extra energy as fat, for later. If you run a long race or participate in a strenuous sporting event, you may need more energy than your body has taken in that day. You fat cells are ready to keep your body energized for those intense times.



Your body has many other types of cells. Each type has a specific job and looks different from other cell types, but does look like other cells of the same type. Bone cells look like other bone cells, but look nothing like liver cells.



Tools for Viewing Cells



A magnifying glass can magnify a cell 10-20 times.



An average microscope can magnify a cell 40, 100, %26amp; 400 times. An advanced optical microscope can magnify a cell 2,000 times.



An electron microscope can magnify a cell 1 million times.



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Check out these helpful Web sites (current June 2004)



www.cellsalive.com



www.eurekascience.com



Heart Muscle Cell



Image copyright Dennis Kunkel.



Here is a micrograph (a photo taken through a microscope) of the muscle tissue in a human heart.



Why does a living organism have different types of cells?

The six characteristics of living things, and an explanation of each one.



Theme #1 - Cells



All living things are composed of one or more cells. Different types of cells have different "jobs" within the organism. Each life form begins from one cell, which then will split. These cells split, and so on. After this has happened several times, differentiation is undergone, when the cells change so that they are not the same thing anymore. Then they are used to begin to put together the final organism, some cells, for example, as the eyes, some as the heart, etc. The only arguable exception to this is viruses. They are not composed of cells, but are said to be "living."



Theme#2 - Organization



Complex organization patterns are found in all living organisms. They arrange themselves on very small levels, grouping like things together. On larger levels, they become visible. This also has to do with differentiation, as the cells are organized in a manner that makes sense for the organism after they change to what they鈥檒l be in the final organism.



Theme#3 - Energy Use



All organisms use energy. The sum of the chemical energy they use is called metabolism. This energy is used to carry out everything they do. Autotrophs (plants) use energy from the sun for photosynthesis, to make their own 鈥榝ood鈥?(glucose). Heterotrophs (animals and humans) must ingest food for this purpose.



Theme#4 - Homeostasis



All organisms have stable internal conditions which must be maintained in order to remain alive. These include temperature, water content, heartbeat, and other such things. In a way, this has to do with energy use, because a certain level of energy must be kept within the body at all times. For this, obviously, humans must then ingest food on a regular basis. Not all conditions are for the body to maintain itself; though most are.



Theme#5 - Growth



All organisms grow and change. Cells divide to form new, identical cells. Differentiation happens, as well, when cells mutate into other types of cells, making a more complex organism. Organisms growing, changing, and becoming more complex is called development. Single-celled organisms do grow as well, but they will only become slightly larger 鈥?this is nearly unmeasurable.



Theme#6 - Reproduction



All organisms reproduce in order to continue the species' life. This is combining genetic information (in sexual reproduction) or splitting into two organisms (in asexual reproduction) in order to create another of the same species. In sexual reproduction, the new organism will have some characteristics from the mother, and some from father. It may look like either of them, or it may not. In asexual reproduction, the new organism is an exact copy of the first. Sometimes, not every member of a species is able to reproduce. As long as others are (which we know they can, if they still exist today) then it does not threaten the species. (Except for mules, but don't worry about them, they are a bizarre anomoly.)



Why does a living organism have different types of cells?

Was that a question or an article ... in one sentence organisums have different types of cells to do different types of funttions... they r like cars ..different type of car for every purpose



Why does a living organism have different types of cells?

Wow, this is a question? Seems like a quick cut and paste to me. Yah like the first guy said different cells do different functions.



Why does a living organism have different types of cells?

because that is the way God made us. (and for other answerers this person wants to know why we have all thoes cells and things)

Does my story sound okay? I need opinions on how it is and what I can change.?

Day One



The steady sound of fingernails drumming on a desk echoed throughout the school lobby. A young girl about the age of seventeen tapped her foot softly as she waited in line. Her waist-length light brown hair was covered up by a cameo green military hat that was tilted a little to the side. She wore a pink airbrushed shirt with a cherry blossom in the bottom right corner, and a pair of dark denim jeans. She pulled her Ipod headphones out of her ears as her turn came up.



The secretary smiled brightly, 閳ユ窏ello, you must be new here.閳?She stated as she handed the girl a small piece of paper. The girl nodded and looked at the paper. She read the paper carefully and then exited the lobby.



As she walked through the hallways of her new school a strong sense of fear washed over her,閳ユ紝hat if this doesn閳ユ獩 work out? What if I stand out to much?閳?she thought to herself with a strong sigh. A young boy about the same age as her looked up from his book just before he ran into the young girl. The boy jumped up and looked around. He stretched his hand out to help the girl up, 閳ユ穾re you okay?閳?he asked with a small smile, 閳ユ窔 am so sorry閳? The girl nodded, 閳ユ窔ts cool.閳?She said as she helped him pick up his books. The boy looked over at her, 閳ユ发y name is Zac閳?he said with a somewhat shaky voice. The girl nodded, 閳ユ发y name is Katherine.閳?br> Zac had dark brown spiky hair and emerald green eyes. He was wearing a white collared long sleeved-shirt and a pair of black jeans. He smiled at Katherine, 閳ユ藩o are you new here?閳?he asked as he walked over to his locker. Katherine nodded, 閳ユ窔 just moved here a few days ago.閳?Zac brushed some of his hair out of his eyes and looked over at Katherine, 閳ユ凡ell Katherine I would like to be the first to welcome you to Certhill High School.閳?He stated with a bow. Katherine chuckled, 閳ユ壕鈧毧ou can call me Kat.閳?She said as she walked away. After she had left Zac leaned against the locker and smiled, 閳ユ窚at閳?he repeated softly.



A few weeks later Katherine walked into the lunch room. She grabbed a tray and looked at the strange substance that the school called food. She grimaced and then put her tray up, 閳ユ窔 guess I am not eating today.閳?She said with a smirk. Kat looked around at all of the different kinds of people that scrambled around the school cafeteria. You had so many stereotypes. There were jocks, cheerleaders, geeks, goths, and people like her and Zac, who were considered normal or average. 閳ユ罚ormal閳ヮ泧 word that is definitely not in my life dictionary閳?she thought to herself.



Kat sighed softly and the started to walk out of the lunch room. She made her way into the gym and saw more people. The cheerleaders were practicing and a few other girls were playing volleyball. One of the cheerleaders sat by the volleyball net criticizing the volleyball players. The cheerleaders went back to their spots and started giggling and pointing at the girls playing volleyball.



Kat walked pass the cheerleaders and before she could reach the bleachers one of the cheerleaders called her over, 閳ユ返ou閳ユ獧e new here aren閳ユ獩 you? Usually I am pretty good at remembering faces.閳?She sated with a perky giggle. Kat nodded, 閳ユ返eah, today is my first day.閳?She said trying to smile.



The cheerleader twirled her strawberry blonde silky hair around her index finger, 閳ユ发y name is Melanie. I am the head cheerleader here at Certhill high.閳?She said with her same peppy voice. Kat nodded, 閳ユ凡hat an achievement.閳?She answered with an annoyed tone. Melanie raised an eyebrow, 閳ユ窊xcuse me? I consider that and achievement.閳?She said with a hand roughly placed on her hip. Kat smirked, 閳ユ伐h please, don閳ユ獩 seem so offended. I just saw you antagonizing those girls.閳?She said pointing to the volleyball players. Melanie glared at Kat, 閳ユ翻he reason I can do that is because I am better than them.閳?She hissed. Kat chuckled, 閳ユ凡hat makes you so much better, your 閳ユ竷heerleading閳?skills? Please doing a few flips is not that hard.閳?She said with a look of frustration on her face.



Melanie smirked, 閳ユ窔f it is so easy I would like to see you do a back flip閳ヮ洉n the floor without using the mini trampoline.閳?She said showing her to the long blue matt. Kat nodded and walked to the beginning of the matt. She placed her hat on the floor and turned around, 閳ユ翻his is a piece of cake compared to some of the other things I have done.閳?She thought to herself. Kat groaned as she saw a crowd gathering in the gym. She took a breath and did back flips down the entire matt, and then ending in a front handspring. She picked up her hat, 閳ユ穾nything else?閳?she asked with a smirk. Melanie frowned, 閳ユ翻hat is no big deal. It is not like I can閳ユ獩 do that.閳?She said with a small smile. One of the other cheerleaders leaned close to her, 閳ユ发el you can閳ユ獩 do that.閳?She whispered. 閳ユ藩hut up!!閳?Melanie yelled as she walked out of the gym.



Zac walked out of the crowd, 閳ユ藩o we have a new cheerleader I presume?閳?he asked with a smirk. Kat shook her head, 閳ユ罚o way am I getting g myself into something like that.閳?She chuckled. Zac nodded, 閳ユ藩o how did you like the food?閳?he asked as the walked over to Kat閳ユ獨 locker. She looked up at him before opening it, 閳ユ窔t was the best darn food I have ever tasted.閳?She answered sarcastically. Kat閳ユ獨 stomach growled and Zac chuckled, 閳ユ窔 guess that says it all.閳?He remarked with a smile. Zac turned towards the door, 閳ユ凡ell, I guess I will see you Monday.閳?He said looking back. Kat nodded, 閳ユ窌uess so.閳?She said as Zac exited the school. Kat leaned against her locker and smiled, 閳ユ翻his wasn閳ユ獩 such a bad first day.閳?She thought to herself .



Does my story sound okay? I need opinions on how it is and what I can change.?

I really love this story. So much imagery and creativity. The only thing i would suggest you alter for this is in indentation for every time someone speaks, and replacing some periods with commas after dialog (like the professionals do) like this:



閳ユ藩hut up!!閳?Melanie yelled as she walked out of the gym.



Zac walked out of the crowd. 閳ユ藩o we have a new cheerleader I presume?閳?he asked with a smirk.



Kat shook her head. 閳ユ罚o way am I getting myself into something like that,閳?she chuckled.



Get it? That's usually how it's done in books; periods and new paragraphs. I guess this explains why some books are so long :)



Does my story sound okay? I need opinions on how it is and what I can change.?

wel impressive but u know wut dont touch it its like u wrote it on a moment of inspiration or somethin dont lose that touch believe me let it be natural spontaneous



Does my story sound okay? I need opinions on how it is and what I can change.?

Good... yea i agree with ethel though....

Is this normal or what?

"So what do you want to do honey?" Nancy asked. We were in her car. "I dont know." I said back. "How about target?" She asked. "No, I dont want to." I told her. "How about dairy queen?" She asked hopefully. "Sure." I replied. Nancy did her everyday-usually-hairpuff. She is constantly checking her hair in the car all the time. She is obsessed with looking good just like Im obsessed with getting sick. We have a lot in common. "So what do you think, honey?" She asked. "Its good." I complimented her. "That's good. She always took me out like once a week. We usually watch movies together, have coffee parties, go to her house and go shopping. I had known her for years. She was such a good friend to me! I looked up to her so much. "So how old are you?" I asked. "Im 56." She answered. "Wow, you only look like 40." I told her. She immediatley started laughing really hard. I smiled knowing that she loved me for saying that. That's what made it so funny. But she really does look young I think. Then we continued to drive. Once we arrived at dairy queen, we quickly hopped out of the car. We glanced at the menu and decided what we wanted to order. This lady named Crystal asked us what we wanted. "Hi guys, My name is Crystal. How may I help you?" She asked politley. " I will get a vanilla ice cream cone please." Nancy told her. Then she asked me what I wanted. "I will get a chocolate ice cream cone please." I ordered. I had learned my good manners from Nancy. She always helped straighten me out. I loved her like a mom and I admired her so much. Then Crystal gave us our cones after five minutes which seemed like forever. We quickly gobbled down our ice cream and wrapped it up. We threw our cones away and jumped into the car. We were on our way to Nancy's house. I loved her house so much. Then we started to hit the road. "So what have you been up to lately honey?" Nancy asked. I loved it when she called me honey. It made me feel special. That's when the questions began. "Not too much." I answered. "Yeah well not too much either sweets." Nancy said as she rummaged through her purse. I started to wonder what she was looking for. Then Nancy's phone rang. She dropped her purse and immediatley answered her urgent call waiting. " Hello." Nancy said. She winked at me. She always does that to me when she is on the phone. I could tell that she didn't want to keep me waiting. "Oh really?" She said all worried. She hung up the phone and started crying. I had never seen Nancy cry before. That's when I got alittle worried. "What's wrong?" I asked all concerned. "My aunt just died." She cried. I dropped my jaw in shock. "But how?" I thought. It was too bad to be true. I just sat there. I had no clue what to say. Afew moments later of awkward silence, Nancy started hugging me. "Oh Alyssa! I love you so much!" She said crying as she started hugging me. I hugged her back. I couldn't beleive what just happened. I was so shocked. Nancy was spending a lot of time on the phone and she was different. The next thing I knew, we were both crying together and cuddling. She let go of me and stared at me for a few seconds. I wondered what she was going to say. "Now you be a good girl." She warned. "I will." I said nodding. I completely understood how she felt at a time like this. This was the first time I had ever seen her in a crisis like this. I was worried about her. We got out of her car and walked into her house. We were having fun already. We always have a blast together. "Can I go visit the bird?" I asked. "Sure." Nancy said. I walked over to the birds cage. The birds name was Linday and it was a girl. It was an african grey parrot. "Hi Lindy!" I shreeked. Lindy started puffing up her feathers. Her pupils got really big. I could tell that the bird was alittle mad. It does that. I immediatley started to mess with the bird. I knew better than to be doing that!" I put my face up to the bird. i wanted to get a closer look at the bird because it was so cute. I just wanted to squeeze it so hard. Lindy started to bob her head up and down real fast. She was spitting out her sead all over the floor. Luckily, Nancy was near by when this happened. She knew how to stop Lindy when she is acting up. "No Lindy! You stop it!" Nancy scolded. The bird just froze up. I laughed. Lindy always acted goofy when people messed with her or scolded her. That is what made it funny. "Come on, honey." Nancy said as she motioned me to come over into the kitchen with her. "Can I just have five more minutes with Lindy?" I begged. "No. You have had enough of that bird. You spend time with me now." She demanded. "Alrite." I agreed. I walked over into the kitchen and sat down at the table with Nancy. We talked for a bit. I showed her my myspace. She thought it was really cool. I even showed her my moms! Then we ate some chocolate cake after being on her laptop. "Do you want some cake?" Nancy asked. "What kind is it?" I wondered. I hated cake with nuts. Nancy usually bakes that kind of cake. "Its chocolate." She answered. "Sure." I said back. She gave me some cake and set it on the kitchen table. The cake piece she gave me was so big. It even had a candle on it for decoration. "Thank you." I said smiling. "Your welcome, honey." Nancy said as she sat down at the table with me. I told her about the sand dunes that me and dylan go to like all the time. "Dylan and I went 4wheeling at the sand dunes." I told her. She was eating cake also. Nancy gave me a "Your so cute." look. I smiled. I knew that look. I was already getting full when i dreaded the last bite of cake to my mouth. I just stopped eating. Then Nancy noticed that I was finished. "Do you want some more cake, honey?" She asked. "No Im too full." I said sighing. "You eat like a bird. You need to fatten up and gain some weight." Nancy said. She was always telling me how skinny I was and how I need to gain weight. I hear that from everybody. "Okay well i better bring you home, honey." Nancy suggested. "Come on, five more minutes." I begged. "Alrite." Nancy finally caved in. I smiled knowing that I could prolly stay for another hour. I started to mess with the bird. I gave her a bath by spraying her with the spray bottle. At the end of the session, Lindy was soaked with water and dripping. I noticed that I overdone it. I stopped spraying the bird. Lindy was already drenched in water. I blowed on the bird to dry her off. She didn't like that. So I stopped. When she doesn't like something, she bobs her head up and down real fast. Then Nancy snapped her fingers and ordered me to come into the kitchen. "Alyssa Zuber!" She yelled. She did that because she knew it made me laugh. I just snapped back at her to mock her. "Okay, Im coming." I said. Her house was so big. It took forever to get from the birds cage to Nancy's kitchen. When i went to the table, she had some more cake that stood infront of me. The food nauseated me. "Oh come on." I said annoyed as I rolled my eyes. I was so full from the big piece she gave me earlier. She just put it back into the fridge. Then she walked over to the birds cage and she noticed there was a big mess all over the floor. It was the birds food that she was spitting out. Nancy had a shocked look on her face. I could tell she was about to snap. Just kidding. She was completely fine with it. She puffed her hair again trying to fix it up. There was a mirror on the birds cage that she could look into. One of her sides was really messy. It was really windy that day. So her hair didnt look too good. Nancy just rolled her eyes and stopped messing with her hair at a time like this. She shook her head at Lindy in dissapointment. Nancy bent down and started to clean up the bird food as she scrapped it up into her hands. I offered to help her with it. I am always willing to lend a hand when it comes to cleaning things up. I really didn't mind much. "Thanks, honey." She said. "Oh my back is killing me." Nancy groaned as she stood up. "Oh that sucks." I said feeling so bad for her. "Im really hot and my back is aching really bad. I think I better go lie down." Nancy suggested as she walked over to the couch and layed down. She was reading a newspaper about a boy who was murdered in Duluth. She always liked to read sad stories like that. Her favorite thing to do was read. Time went on. It went by way too fast. I was having so much fun already. It was already 7:00. I knew Nancy would be asking me to leave soon. We talked for about 20 minutes. Then we started to get ready to hit the road. "Im going to bring you home, honey." Nancy said. "Five more minutes?" I asked hopefully. I hoped with all of my heart she would cave in one more time and let me stay just alittle bit longer. "Well you can't stay here forever. I got to bring you home sometime." She told me. We got ready. "Bye Lindy." I said. I was hoping for her to say goodbye back. But there was nothing. "Oh well." I told myself. "Maybe next time." I thought. I was going to miss Lindy! I loved that bird! She was so cute! I really didnt want to leave Nancy's house. It was so fun. We always had fun together. It was such a bummer knowing that I had to leave after all of the fun we had. I put on my shoes and I went out to her car. She hopped in also and it was a long drive. The car drive lasted almost 20 minutes. We arrived at my house and I had to say goodbye to Nancy. "Alrite bye honey. I love you" Nancy said as she gave me a kiss on the cheek. "See ya. I love you too." I said as I left her car and walked into my house. I knew that Nancy and I were going to be the bestest friends forever. I loved her to death!!!



Is this normal or what?

Is the answer 5?



Is this normal or what?

that's way too long



Is this normal or what?

did I miss the punch line?



Is this normal or what?

This one - at band camp ...



Is this normal or what?

WTF ??????????



Is this normal or what?

oh come on milk it for all its worth



Is this normal or what?

that was way too long............................WTF

I need serious suggestions! PICTURES included =]?

Here are some pictures of my hair right now (gross, I know). It's plain, boring, frizzy, not pretty, and ugly.



What I want = PRETTY hair!



I'm 5'9", very very skinny, and I have a long neck. So please take that into consideration when giving suggestions.



For the ponytail ones, I know I have weird things on the side of my head that look like bald spots, they aren't, I just have a really weird hairline like my mom.



PLEASE give any suggestions at all, or tell me what you think of my hair. Length, style, color, products, anything is great. I'm really tired of my hair and I want pretty hair for once! Thanks.



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And here's a bad picture of my hair outside my right ear, I don't normally wear it like that because as you can see I have a piece shorter than the rest that I'm trying to grow out (from when I had regular bangs).



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Yeah, I'm pretty much desperate.



I need serious suggestions! PICTURES included =]?

first of all, dont say your ugly. the best thing about someone is confidence



maybe add some beachy waves to it. http://www.seventeen.com/hair-skin-makeu...



and the color looks a bit ashy, so a dark brown would be nice.



a few inches shorter



layers



and that's about it!



ps i have that necklace. you got it from ae right?



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if i were you i would try to get it layered. my hair looked a lot like yours but i got it layered and highlighted! also if u got it layered that piece u said bothered you wouldnt matter so much. i think your hair looks pretty now but layering would give it more volume and shape. hope this helps! good luck!



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Since you are thin with a long neck you would be able to pull off a shorter hair style. Your hair is long and kinda plan now, why don't you cut it a little longer then your shoulders and get some longer layers. Ask for the cut to be done with a razor to give it a trendy edge. I think with your build it would be very cute and stylish. You would still be able to pull it up but yet when it is down it would give you more style.



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Heres couple of hair styles :D



The quiff



Take a section from the top of your head and lightly tease the roots, and spray with hairspray.



Then pull the hair backwards away from your face, twist and push it forward to create a quiff.



Pin into place and gently pull at the sides until it's sitting right. Give it another spray and you're good to go!



The plaits and pigtails



Let your hair part in it's natural way, either on the side or in the middle.



Then loosely pull your hair into two bunches, and plait halfway down.



Secure them with elastics so that you have half a plait and half a pigtail.



Pop in either a clip or headband to pretty things up.



The braids



If your hair is naturally straight, wash your hair the night before and plait it, so that you'll wake up with pretty waves.



Then in the morning, take two really small sections of hair at the front of your face, where your part starts.



Then plait the sections and pull back and pin.



The headband



Part your hair on the side and smooth down with a brush or hairspray to fight any frizzes.



Then pop your headband on from on top of your head, instead of pushing it on. That way you keep your part line neat and tidy.



Smooth in some gloss or serum to give it an extra polished finish.



The half up, half down



This 'do works well with fringes or side sweeps, but can still look hot with any cut.



Section your hair so that you pull the top quarter of your hair back into a elastic or pinning it into a messy bun.



Then let some pieces of hair fallout and frame your face to give it that messy boho feel and scrunch with a hair putty or texturising product.



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Get a shoulder length cut.



Layered alot



and long side bands. they're not like straight across your forehead kinda bangs. You wont even be able to tell that you have bangs when your hair's down



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get it choppy cut to maybe and inch below the shoulders and maybe a dark brown and get some shorter bangs



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i think some highlights would kick up your color... maybe take off 2 inches and get long layers all around to add body and angles around your face to blend with that piece you are trying to grow out. by the way your hair is very smooth and pretty i would never look at it and think "that girl's hair needs help." :)



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that is soo creepy how you blacked your face out



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You have very pretty hair, I dont know why you think its so awful =] but iff im not seeing clearly, here are some suggestions,



you could make your bangs go more to the side, and get some layers throughout your hair, just dont get the layers framing your face, it will make your neck apear longer.. And for frizz, just try and find a good conditioner and shampoo, and find some product. You could also try a falttening iorn, but iff you use that to much it will fry your hair, and do avoid frizz some more instead of air drying your hair, try a hair dryer as you brush your hair blow the dyrer on top of the hair . Hope i helped and that you get the hair you are looking for =]



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u can part it on the side.. like beside where u had your bangs and get side bangs. and u can get layers cut in ur hair for volume... heres what i mean by the bangs



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i had the same problem and i got my hair cut a few weeks ago and i got a lot of volume on it. i asked for alot of short layers and bangs starting at the bottom of my eyebrow and angling down. then i got angles from the chin down. i brought a picture like this in with me



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i like the pony tail look



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Perhaps a bob. I think something shorter and darker would look really stylish.



If you want something a little less "drastic",have it cut it a few inches shorter and add some layers.



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Try getting layers and highlights.



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clip end and dye hair dark brown



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find a good stylist in your area. if you see someone with hair you like, ask them who their stylist is. don't do anything impulsive that you'll regret.



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Try Extensions Or Layers Curl Your Hair And Use Volumizing Mousse I Have A Friend With The Same Problem!



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i agree with everyone else a shattered cut layers. highlights for lift and contrast color for depth.



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blow dry your hair down then it will be less frizz, if your allowed to i would say dye it a lilttle darker brown (but thats just me) if u take showers at night you could put curlers in and sleep with them in then brush it out in the morning, it could be a nice wave if your hair doesn't stay in curls like mine, u then would have a new kind of hair style, i don't know what kind of shampoo or conditinar to recomend sorry

You must read this it is soo funny! I need input tho......?

Okay so we have an english assignment to write an essay about our expertise, and my teacher doesnt give out the easy grades, so I choose somthing funny to help maybe pursuade him. Tell me what you think:



Cassie Wingate



HOW TO TEACH YOUR CAT NOT TO POOP ON THE FLOOR



First off, do not be upset with your cat when you come home to a piece of poop on your carpet. They do not know better. Cats do not learn as easily as dogs or other animals do. Although, cats may have more knowledge than we know they do, because we are their slaves.



In order to gain the most efficiency in solving this problem you must detect why the cat has chosen to vandalize your innocent carpet, table, chair, sofa, etc. In doing so, investigate the premises. First, check out the litter box. Is the litter box too dirty? Is it too clean? Ask yourself, why would you do it? Continuing the investigation, inspect the food situation. Did she eat something bad? Is she sick? Do not leave out any possibilities that it was not her intention. If you do find that she may have just done the deed out of sheer rudeness, this is where my method comes in handy.



I have had much success in what I like to call the 閳ユ藩elf-Cleaning閳?method. You find your kitty; the suspect of the offense, find the poop; the offense, and point at it in front of her making sure you have her attention.



Next, up, to position your cat to the right angle in which it will be easy access for her paws to come together and pick up the piece of poo. I never pick up her poop for her if she meant to poop there. If she was sick, I would clean it up myself because I am an understanding and forgiving person.



Now, you must carry the cat while she holds the poo, to the nearest waste receptacle. After it has been disposed, you sit down and have a chat with the cat. Explain to her why you do not want her to poop on the floor. Tell her it is wrong. Show her the litter box, and maybe if you feel it may be more effective, place the poop inside the box instead of just throwing it right away. If you place the poop back where it belongs then of course, she will start to think that maybe this is where I need to put it and nowhere else.



Another thing to keep in mind is your cat may be unaware that she leaves poop in the wrong place. For instance, does the cat have long hair? Perhaps the poop sticks to the hair and comes off at a later point in which it finds itself to be on your carpet, this is common. To help with this situation, you may want to clip her hair short around her behind. If you need to clip her hair, do it while she is relaxed; maybe she could be sleeping in your lap.



As a cat owner, I have noticed a vast improvement in my cat閳ユ獨 disposal habits. If your cat does not improve her actions, and you made sure it was not because of the other reasons, then at least you will get a good laugh out of my 閳ユ藩elf-Cleaning閳?method.



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this was hilarious to read this morning. thank you so much for the good laugh.



i'm not sure what grade you are in, but if you say your teacher is hard at giving good grades, you may want to check with the other kids before submitting. you may get an A for creativity, but he may not like the material.



as co-owner of a cat, she poops in the tub. i dont mind the tub, cause atleast it's in the right room, wrong ceramic area and wrong species. but you didnt address about peeing. ha ha ha.



GOOD LUCK TO YOU!!!!



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Now that's funny! I like it!



However, your teacher may not have the same sense of humor as you do... Just a thought!



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im not sure if "poop" should be used. It makes it sound like a joke instead of an essay. Try feces or stool....



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If you don't get a good grade, you should at least get an A on creativity.



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Ummmm, not sure what to say. First off, how old are you? This is a pretty juvenile subject, so I hope this isn't a high school essay. Is this really something your teacher is looking for? All I can say is that I hope your teacher has a sense of humor. This is just silly.



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Just a few notes...it starts off like a fourth grader wrote this as a how-to, seeing as they always start off with "first...", and the way it flows as you read it comes off as a how-to more than saying something about your expertise. Also, you should try to use another word other than "poop" or "poo" as it is very repetitive. Good luck, but just to let you know, most hard-knock prof's I had wouldn't have broke for an A over something like this.



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It sounds like a good essay, but the first paragraph needs to be changed around a little, it doesn't flow with the rest of your essay, I would start with the beginning of your second paragraph as your opening sentence and build off of that, and the thesaurus works wonders for words that you have to re-use, it will give you different words that still have the same meaning.



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Oh my gosh Cassie, that is such a good essay I think you will do very well on it. Parts were funny and still your learning from it. You made me feel like I was in school lol but it was a fun lesson lol.



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i really thought you must be in junior high until i got to the end and you said you are in collage. you cannot be serious? i hope your teacher likes you!!



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i dont see what is not to like about it. even for being a junior in college. sometimes ya gotta dance!! duh. poop does sound a llittle juvenile but it is better and more fun than feces or stool. i learned something out of it. i have three cats, i will have to try it.!!!! thanks!!!!



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Hi cassie,



For you to write this about your cat as an essay assignment shows you have good humor and could be lively and a refreshing read compared to other students. Well if you really do have a cat that poops on the rug a good way to solve this problem is just a pinch of catnip in the corner of the litterbox. The kitty will be automatically attracted and no coaching necessary.

Dreads gone wrong...?

My boyfriend has just begun getting dreads. He was going to get them professionally done but decided he couldn't wait. So about 2 days ago he figured he could just do them by himself (and another friend of course to seperate the parts). His hair is really thin and straight and he bought dread head dread kit to use. However I say that they look nothing like dreads. I understand that its the beginning stage but it looks like he didn't really do anything to his hair. It just looks like he hasnt washed it in a few days. Each piece is fairly straight with a bit of tangling. He has been using the wax and twisting each piece but they still dont look right to me. He says that this is the way they look when there first done and it takes a few weeks for them to look right, but I'm having a hard time believing that. I could be wrong. I like dreads and think they look nice on people but these just dont look right....



Could anyone help me and him? Or tell me if he is doing something wrong....



Dreads gone wrong...?

He's right. They don't just dread off the bat. They take a bit of time. If they still don't look right after 2 weeks, slap him (for entertainment purposes only), then drag him to the salon to get them fixed.

Break please?

So here's my long complicated hair story. My hair is soo incredibly thick. And on top of that it's really frizzy. I hate it. And last year i cut it to my shoulders, now its about an inch and a half past my shoulders. And it's really unhealthy from dying it. I've given it a break now and it's growing a little more. But the only way I'm happy is if I straighten it, which takes about an hour and a half everyday. I need a break from that, and I want my hair to be long, wavey, and healthy like it was a couple years ago. When I try to do that I brush it the second i get out of the shower and let it air dry with some product in it. But after its dry, if I brush it, it poofs up. I just read a magazine that said I could put it into loose braids and then once its almost dry take some product and piece it out. I'm doubting that. So, is there anything more or anything else I can do to that it dries a little bit shinier and I can piece out in wavey strands with some product?



Break please?

yah.

Dreads gone wrong...?

My boyfriend has just begun getting dreads. He was going to get them professionally done but decided he couldn't wait. So about 2 days ago he figured he could just do them by himself (and another friend of course to seperate the parts). His hair is really thin and straight and he bought dread head dread kit to use. However I say that they look nothing like dreads. I understand that its the beginning stage but it looks like he didn't really do anything to his hair. It just looks like he hasnt washed it in a few days. Each piece is fairly straight with a bit of tangling. He has been using the wax and twisting each piece but they still dont look right to me. He says that this is the way they look when there first done and it takes a few weeks for them to look right, but I'm having a hard time believing that. I could be wrong. I like dreads and think they look nice on people but these just dont look right....



Could anyone help me and him? Or tell me if he is doing something wrong....



Dreads gone wrong...?

He's right. They don't just dread off the bat. They take a bit of time. If they still don't look right after 2 weeks, slap him (for entertainment purposes only), then drag him to the salon to get them fixed.

Bathingsuit issues??

when ever i wear a 2 piece, i have to always adjust the bottoms because my pubic hair hangs out of it. i dont no how other girls dont have that problem. im 14, havent had my period. is this normal, happen to any of you? what should i do? i dont wanna shave it..



Bathingsuit issues??

You could try a different style bottom. Boy shorts or hipsters are cut lower than bikini-style bottoms and might cover you in the places you're looking to be covered! You can also trim the hair so that it's not long enough to stretch and poke out. If it weren't for shaving/waxing, though, I think just about everyone would show hair when wearing bikini bottoms :)



Bathingsuit issues??

well i suggest u try trimming the hairs a bit...i think it looks sexy as hell....trim off the hairs that are showing on the side or w.e. really short.....good luck



Bathingsuit issues??

If you don't want to shave, I suggest you wax. That's the only way to get rid of those hairs and keep them from being seen. I HAVE to shave there in order for nothing to show. Just be careful, use plenty of shaving cream if you do end up shaving, and you should be all right. The vast majority of women have to shave there to wear bathing suits.



Bathingsuit issues??

Why don't you wear the swim shorts instead?



Bathingsuit issues??

Hi Sweetie,



Yes, that would be embarressing! If U want



something 4 that area alone, I'd advise u to



either get long lasting hair removal, like Neet



or a Bikini Wax, which U can buy a kit %26amp; do at home. But Please don't shave there, U'll regret the rash %26amp; pimples that follow, o.k?



LOL, Diana D



Bathingsuit issues??

yeah, you shouldnt shave it, it will only make it worse. you need to wax and i pormise its not as bad as you think it is. after the first few times, the hair grows finer and it hurts less and less. its soooo much better than having to worry about sticking out of your bathing suit because thats really embarrassing. other than that, idk maybe try a different bathing suit or learn to deal with it. i got mine done yesterday because im going on vacation and it didnt hurt that much, its quick and lasts for a month. i would talk to your mom about it and see if she will make you an appointment.



Bathingsuit issues??

Don't shave or wax just yet. Just get a scissors and trim the hairs real short. This will make them unnoticeable! Good luck! =D



Bathingsuit issues??

Wear swimming shorts on top of the bikini bottoms. I do that and plenty others do too.

Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

Hi i have a huge problem hopefully someone can answer it before i go get another piece of crap tomorrow. I need a good flat iron that i can also use to curl my hair. I've recently purchased an infinity revlon flat iron from walmart that didnt work at all with my hair. Then when I to sally's beauty supply and bought a helen troy cermic series with curved plated that they assured would be good for my hair. When I got home and tried it out it didnt even grip my hair. Now my hair is not thick and its not thin its right in between and its a little past my shoulders. I am working with a budget however i have 40 to spend and cant afford anything higher I also wanna buy it tomorrow to do my hair for thanksgiving. Please help me with my dilemma as you can see I've already made two bad choices. Thank you.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

I would also recommend CHI also but I see you're on a budget.



Get the Gold N' Hot from Sallys it will do the job until you can afford a CHI. It's around $40 give or take



make sure you also get the one with the rolled edges so you can curl or flip your hair.



Make sure you're using the right hair products to help straighten your hair they make a huge difference and prevents lot so damage.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

The Chi, it's a salon style flat iron I use them for my models all the time they work wonders.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

Sedu, It's what celebrities use i guess and it really quickens the process! http://www.sedubeauty.com/sedu_flat_iron...



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

Well, ys, the chi is great, but can go around $200.



Bed heads good too, but for one that can do bth it will probebly be around $70



The Revlon wet to strait s great for straitening $25-30,



and conair hair curlers for curling, usually about $20, but I just got some on sale at exerdeds for $10.



Hope that helped :D



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The sedu from Chi.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

get any one that is ceramic, and don't forget to do your hair in small pieces, not all together as a whole. Really, the super expensive ones can work just as good as a $30-$40 if you can use them correctly. Don't waste your money.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

Make sure you get one that uses ceramic. Skip WalMart and go to Sally Beauty Supply. It's more expensive, but better quality. Speaking of which, one thing to keep in mind is quality. How much did you spend on that crappy one? Are you really willing to spend as much as $40 on something that fries your hair and tears it again? You're better off waiting until you can save enough. I got a great one for under $100, but it was still more than $40.



You could also consider doing as I do and going natural. Curls rock.



Help me choose a good flat iron please!! Asap?

I have a Remington wet to dry flat iron. It doesn't curl but straightens amazingly. I LOVE it. I have had bad flat irons and sounds like we have similar hair..the remington works really for for straightening.



You may have to buy a curling iron because the cheaper two-in-one deals are really no good.



p.s. the remington looks cheap but it works, trust me.



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What can I do?

So here's my long complicated hair story. My hair is soo incredibly thick. And on top of that it's really frizzy. I hate it. And last year i cut it to my shoulders, now its about an inch and a half past my shoulders. And it's really unhealthy from dying it. I've given it a break now and it's growing a little more. But the only way I'm happy is if I straighten it, which takes about an hour and a half everyday. I need a break from that, and I want my hair to be long, wavey, and healthy like it was a couple years ago. When I try to do that I brush it the second i get out of the shower and let it air dry with some product in it. But after its dry, if I brush it, it poofs up. I just read a magazine that said I could put it into loose braids and then once its almost dry take some product and piece it out. I'm doubting that. So, is there anything more or anything else I can do to that it dries a little bit shinier and I can piece out in wavey strands with some product?



What can I do?

Go to your salon for a deep penetraiting conditioning treatment, have your hair thinned out and then you can use gel on your hair when its wet, rub a little in all over and comb it through. Dry it scrunching it and it should look at bit healthier!



What can I do?

Wow! First off, I think you should get some kind of damage treatment at the salon or investment in some good deep conditioner (like Kerastase.) As for the product, you should buy TRESemme curling mousse. It works very well for my thick, semi-wavy hair. All you have to do is take 1-3 golf ball sized dollops and scrunch throughout hair. After that, DO NOT TOUCH IT!!! It will frizz if you do. And do not brush wet hair; all that leads to is more damaged because hair breaks very easily when wet; it has more elasticity. All you have to do is comb it with a wide-toothed comb or a special shower comb.

Terrified Toddler!?

My 3-year old (non-verbal) daughter has been terrified to go to day care. This morning she had a good morning but when we pulled into the parking lot she began wimpering. She got so upset today she scratched herself all over her face. Previously she was ok there and even began joining in group activities. Now she won't even eat. The staff have been the same for the past 2-3 months and one of the teachers has been there since the place opened and we started going there in August.



That teacher said my daughter may be terrified of a part-time boy who I once witnessed pull her hair. My daughter was standing off by herself and I was looking right at her. This little piece of trash walked RIGHT over to my daughter and gave her hair a yank. He really went out of his way to do it. And all he got from the teacher was a "no-no". How can I get to the bottom of this? I tried talking to the owner today %26amp; he was clueless.



And yes we are having my daughter evaluated for autism, speech delay, etc.



Terrified Toddler!?

I am sorry your little girl has had to put up with bullying at daycare. If you have gone to the director of the day care and do not feel satisfyed with his response, I think you should make it clear to him that this will not be tolerated and since he fails to see the seriousness of the situation, you will be forced to take your daughter to a day care that will understand the importance of discipline. Your daughter is your world and while there will always be children like that little boy in each daycare, it's not unreasonable for you to expect that the teachers in the classrooms would be willing to put a stop to it and keep a closery eye on things.



Good luck!



Terrified Toddler!?

Shouldn't they tell me who bit my kid?? What if there is injury requiring medical treatment? Who is responsible? Report It



Terrified Toddler!?

Have a chat with the little turd's parents. You can talk to the kid yourself but I doubt his parents would like it...It is very good you're having your daughter checked, hopefully the results are good.



Terrified Toddler!?

Maybe investigate that something else may be going on, I pray to God, that something isn't happening that she can't tell you about, are there cameras in that daycare and such? Just a suggestion, maybe look into other things happening, than just her hair getting pulled? She definantly sounds like she fears something about that daycare.



Terrified Toddler!?

Is there any way you can go there and just observe without having her know you're watching? Any decent day care would let you do this. The fact that the owner was "clueless" is a worry sign for me as a parent.



Terrified Toddler!?

I work at a preschool and I agree see if you can drop in and observe whats going on there. I understand your concern about all the boy got was a no no but that is the way problems are usually handled. The kids can't spend the whole day in time out so we are forced to be lenient and let somethings go with a simple talking to. If the behavior continues then the child is separated from the group.



Terrified Toddler!?

Tell the teacher that she should be tuting him in timeout or your daughter will leave the program



Terrified Toddler!?

Time to find a more supportive daycare that has more knowledgable staff.



Terrified Toddler!?

The teachers SHOULD be attending the victom first (your daughter) when this little boy (not piece of trash) who is in great need of social skills, pulled your daughters hair. It would have been appropriate for the teacher to point out your daughters face and say OUT LOUD, "when you pulled her hair, it really hurt. If you want to get her attention, you can pat her gently on the shoulder like this ( and have her do it physically). I am assuming these caregivers are trained to guide the children positively. I would ask what curriculum they used and what kind of credendials the caregivers have. The should have at least 15 units in child development. A certificate or child development credential would be great.



I would volunteer one day or two to see what they do. They should have a scedule and routine. Find depending on the age of the children there should be a certain teacher/ child ratio.



Going back to how the teacher handled the little boy pulling your daughters hair by saying , "No No..." was not helpful information to the boy or your daughter. No no, doesn't tell the little boy what to do instead and doesn't show him empathy. I am a preschool teacher and this is definetly not how we were trained to hanle the situation. I would definetly find another program and interview the teachers to see what they do in certain situations. I asked about curriculum and what kind of credentials they had.



Terrified Toddler!?

Try talking to your 3 year old. Ask her what she is afraid of. Ask her if there is another child that hurts her. Or maybe an adult. Ask her if someone has done anything to her that she may not like. Don't say "did Alex pull your hair." Don't give her scenarios. Then talk to the day care. She will open up if something is wrong. If she does not say much then may be she just doesn't like school. Like one of my son's make up a different excuse every day. So I know it is just him and no something that is happing at school. Be creative with the way you go about it.

If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you thin

Fallen Angel. Chapter one. In search of Identity.



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"My eyes opened and I realized I was resting on a soft bed. I was covered with a soft baby blue blanket. The birds chirpedrhythmically, and the sunlight reflectedfrom the window adjacent from the bed was hurting my eyes. I squinted as I looked upon it, but it really didn't helprelieve the pain at all. The pain felt as if I was looking directly at a flashlight. I could easily tell the time of day was morning. I sat up on the bed and looked around the bedroom, the walls were painted pink, the drawers and bookshelves standing opposite of the window were just as blue as the blanket that I hadjust pulled off. The room was unfamiliar to me. I wondered how I got here, but I could not recall anything that occurred before this present point, nothing at all.



I got out of bed and there was a somewhat loud clanking sound coming from the polished wooden floor. I looked down and saw a silver heart shaped pendant bonded with small silver chains. I bent over and picked up the locket. It was two and a half inches long, and it gleamed and shimmered like precious diamonds in the sunlight behind me. I turned the heart shaped locket and saw a small clasp. I opened the locket and saw a photo of a young woman on the left who seemed to be wearing a purple dress robe. Next to her on the right was a little girl, wearing similar clothing except she wore pink instead of purple. Both of them had long black hair and they were smiling at each other. I glanced at the little girl again, and although the child seemed so cute, she also seemed very familiar. There was a mirror adjacent to the door in front of me. I saw my own reflection in the mirror. I realized that I had black hair just like the two people in the photo, wearing a white T-Shirt and white shorts, I also saw in the mirror that I had no shoes on. Then I looked at the little girl in the picture again. That little girl鈥檚 face and hair are somewhat similar to mine. On the left side of the locket I saw a something printed on the silver metal. The upper left corner of the heart locket was a name that was printed 鈥淔allen angel鈥?and in the middle there was date carved into the locket saying



20 December 1995



The date on the locket caught my attention. I wondered why the date was even printed there. What happened on that day? Why is it so significant? I also wondered who the young woman is in the photo, and if the little girl next to her is really me. The door in front of me knocked unexpectedly. I just watched and glared at it, then seconds later the door opened. The one who knocked on the door was a young woman, wearing a white dress and I also noticed a white apron she was wearing that seemed to blend in. Her rectanglular glasses were completely crooked, it looks as if it was about to fall off her face. Her face was completely dirty, and her crimson hair looked as if it were never brushed for weeks perhaps months. Her emerald eyes came into contact with mine, and said to me in a somewhat squeaky voice.



鈥淗ello, you鈥檙e awake鈥?br>



I continued to glare at her, and remind silent.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name?鈥?said the woman, smiling lightly 鈥淢y name is Solana Frostly.鈥?br>



Unfortunately I didn鈥檛 have an answer to that question. I felt pretty stupid not knowing my own name, so I remained silent and continued to stare at her.



鈥淯m, you don鈥檛 talk much do you?鈥?said Solana, timidly. 鈥淢y daughter Aiyana found you in the forest out cold so we took you in our home and we kept you warm and placed you in her room. Um鈥?. Are you feeling okay?鈥?br>



I nodded lightly, and whispered.



鈥淵es鈥?br>



鈥淚鈥檓 glad to hear it!鈥?said Solana, smiling brightly. 鈥淐ome downstairs, I made some breakfast. When you finished eating we can call your parents. How old are you by the way鈥?br>



鈥淭-Tw-Twelve鈥?I answered a little unsure of myself.



鈥淥h that鈥檚 great!鈥?Said Solana, 鈥淎iyana is just about you age- Well, perhaps. She鈥檒l be turning twelve in a few days, so I鈥檓 sure you two would get along just fine. Now please come downstairs for some breakfast. I鈥檓 not sure if there is any breakfast left, I didn鈥檛 expect you to be awake at this time. After breakfast we鈥檒l call your parents, they must be worried sick about you. So we鈥檒l just let them know that you鈥檙e okay鈥?br>



Solana turned around and left. Seconds later, I got up off the floor, where I was sitting, left the room and went down the stairs. After I reached the first floor, I heard a voice calling to me.



鈥淗ey, over here! We saved you some breakfast鈥?br>



I turned to where the voice is coming from. It was Solana and another girl who had long scarlet hair just like Solana鈥檚 in a kitchen. I walked inside the kitchen where the girl sat at a circular wooden table that was near a corner of the kitchen. The table had a large plate with a layer of pancakes on a white ceramic plate and a bottle of maple syrup sitting there. I gagged at the odor of burnt food. The sink next to me were piled with dirty dishes. There were shards of broken glass on the white tile floors. I almost stepped on them, while I was still barefoot. Solana was near an oven holding a silver metal spatula, jumping and shrieking hysterically trying to put out the flames that bloomed from the stove just a second ago. I sat at the table where the girl sat. I glared at her for a moment. The girl looked back at me and smiled.



鈥淥h hello,鈥?She said quickly, 鈥淒on鈥檛 mind my Mom, she鈥檚 very clumsy when it comes to housekeeping. As you can see, she鈥檚 not always the best cook. Although she鈥檚 very clumsy and careless, she has her moments. She鈥檚 only like this when she鈥檚 stressed out. It鈥檚 very typical for adults.Other than that she鈥檚 a great cook. Oh, I鈥檓 so sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I鈥檓 Aiyana.鈥?br>



Aiyana reached out her right hand towards me.



I looked at her hand. I wondered what she made that gesture for. I continued to stare at it.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name鈥?She asked.



My eyes were drawn from her hand to her face. It鈥檚 that question again. I was gnawing my bottom lip, trying hard to remember, but it was impossible. All I could do now is give Aiyana a light shrug. Aiyana frowned.



鈥淚 tried asking her the same thing,鈥?said Solana finally finished extinguishing the flames on the stove, 鈥渂ut she wouldn鈥檛 tell me. She must be shy, let鈥檚 give her some time to relax a bit. Aiyana pumpkin, go to the living room and find the phone. I think it鈥檚 time we call her parents. And turn on the computer on your way back here, and look up something on missing children鈥?br>



Aiyana looked at her mother and nodded. She got up off her chair and left the kitchen. Now my attention is drawn to Solana, who smiled at me, placed some pancakes on the plate in front of me and said,



鈥淧lease eat some pancakes, they鈥檙e really tasty. I don鈥檛 want you to go hungry. I鈥檒l give you a fork and a glass of orange juice.鈥?br>



Solana handed me a silver metal fork, with four prongs and the flower design carved on the brown wooden handle. She also grasped the bottle of maple syrup and poured its sticky brown contents on the plate of pancakes. I looked down and stared at it.



鈥淗mm,鈥?said Solana. 鈥淚t seems that you have never tasted pancakes before. Just cut a piece off and eat it.



I looked up at Solana once more, remembering what Aiyana told me earlier, that she isn鈥檛 always the best cook. I assumed that these pancakes of hers would not taste very pleasant. I found Solana as a very kind person and the last thing I want to do is offend her. With my assumption set aside, I grabbed the fork that was previously placed on the table, Cut off a piece of the pancake and placed it into my open mouth. My bottom jaw made contact with my upper one, while moving in a clockwise position. The food was soft and tasted sugary. While eating it I had this pleasant feeling, I assumed that the pancakes would taste horrible, but it was the opposite. I looked up at Solana again and smiled. Solana smiled back at me.



In each chapter there will be a new reply. So i need your opinion on this story.



If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you think of it?

good start



i like it



go on



try to use more adjectives



john



If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you think of it?

How about you post your work on fictionpress.com? It's a really writer-friendly website, where you'll get opinions and reviews. Then you don't have to bother with putting the entire story on here.



If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you think of it?

I think it's a great start to a story. It needs a little tweaking here and there but otherwise it held my attention and I would like to read more.



If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you think of it?

Like most of the crap on here of this sort, it's not very good. Your little peers will fall all over themselves telling you how good it is, but let's face it, they don't know any more than YOU do about writing and what makes a good story. Trust me. It's not very good.



If you have patience please read this story that I wrote. A bit long, but I wanna know what you think of it?

It's pretty good, although I do hav a few suggestions:



1. You jump into the part with the locket a little too quickly, putting too much emphasis on it. It makes the writing seem a bit hasty and immature. When reading, you can immediately tell that the locket is a vital part to the story, which you probably don't want to make too clear. Long story short, don't go into so much detail about it. Instead, make it seem a minor detail of her day and write as little as possible about it. If necessary, have her look at it again some other time to describe it in more detail.



2. You have repeated some words too many times, such as "her". Try not to do this.



3. Don't describe everything in too much detail, as this can give unwanted details and add length. If you do this too often, it can make your writing seem a little overdeveloped.



Other than these few minor details, you have written a very nice piece. Keep up the good work!

I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

Fallen Angel. Chapter one. In search of Identity.



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"My eyes opened and I realized I was resting on a soft bed. I was covered with a soft baby blue blanket. The birds chirpedrhythmically, and the sunlight reflectedfrom the window adjacent from the bed was hurting my eyes. I squinted as I looked upon it, but it really didn't helprelieve the pain at all. The pain felt as if I was looking directly at a flashlight. I could easily tell the time of day was morning. I sat up on the bed and looked around the bedroom, the walls were painted pink, the drawers and bookshelves standing opposite of the window were just as blue as the blanket that I hadjust pulled off. The room was unfamiliar to me. I wondered how I got here, but I could not recall anything that occurred before this present point, nothing at all.



I got out of bed and there was a somewhat loud clanking sound coming from the polished wooden floor. I looked down and saw a silver heart shaped pendant bonded with small silver chains. I bent over and picked up the locket. It was two and a half inches long, and it gleamed and shimmered like precious diamonds in the sunlight behind me. I turned the heart shaped locket and saw a small clasp. I opened the locket and saw a photo of a young woman on the left who seemed to be wearing a purple dress robe. Next to her on the right was a little girl, wearing similar clothing except she wore pink instead of purple. Both of them had long black hair and they were smiling at each other. I glanced at the little girl again, and although the child seemed so cute, she also seemed very familiar. There was a mirror adjacent to the door in front of me. I saw my own reflection in the mirror. I realized that I had black hair just like the two people in the photo, wearing a white T-Shirt and white shorts, I also saw in the mirror that I had no shoes on. Then I looked at the little girl in the picture again. That little girl鈥檚 face and hair are somewhat similar to mine. On the left side of the locket I saw a something printed on the silver metal. The upper left corner of the heart locket was a name that was printed 鈥淔allen angel鈥?and in the middle there was date carved into the locket saying



20 December 1995



The date on the locket caught my attention. I wondered why the date was even printed there. What happened on that day? Why is it so significant? I also wondered who the young woman is in the photo, and if the little girl next to her is really me. The door in front of me knocked unexpectedly. I just watched and glared at it, then seconds later the door opened. The one who knocked on the door was a young woman, wearing a white dress and I also noticed a white apron she was wearing that seemed to blend in. Her rectanglular glasses were completely crooked, it looks as if it was about to fall off her face. Her face was completely dirty, and her crimson hair looked as if it were never brushed for weeks perhaps months. Her emerald eyes came into contact with mine, and said to me in a somewhat squeaky voice.



鈥淗ello, you鈥檙e awake鈥?br>



I continued to glare at her, and remind silent.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name?鈥?said the woman, smiling lightly 鈥淢y name is Solana Frostly.鈥?br>



Unfortunately I didn鈥檛 have an answer to that question. I felt pretty stupid not knowing my own name, so I remained silent and continued to stare at her.



鈥淯m, you don鈥檛 talk much do you?鈥?said Solana, timidly. 鈥淢y daughter Aiyana found you in the forest out cold so we took you in our home and we kept you warm and placed you in her room. Um鈥?. Are you feeling okay?鈥?br>



I nodded lightly, and whispered.



鈥淵es鈥?br>



鈥淚鈥檓 glad to hear it!鈥?said Solana, smiling brightly. 鈥淐ome downstairs, I made some breakfast. When you finished eating we can call your parents. How old are you by the way鈥?br>



鈥淭-Tw-Twelve鈥?I answered a little unsure of myself.



鈥淥h that鈥檚 great!鈥?Said Solana, 鈥淎iyana is just about you age- Well, perhaps. She鈥檒l be turning twelve in a few days, so I鈥檓 sure you two would get along just fine. Now please come downstairs for some breakfast. I鈥檓 not sure if there is any breakfast left, I didn鈥檛 expect you to be awake at this time. After breakfast we鈥檒l call your parents, they must be worried sick about you. So we鈥檒l just let them know that you鈥檙e okay鈥?br>



Solana turned around and left. Seconds later, I got up off the floor, where I was sitting, left the room and went down the stairs. After I reached the first floor, I heard a voice calling to me.



鈥淗ey, over here! We saved you some breakfast鈥?br>



I turned to where the voice is coming from. It was Solana and another girl who had long scarlet hair just like Solana鈥檚 in a kitchen. I walked inside the kitchen where the girl sat at a circular wooden table that was near a corner of the kitchen. The table had a large plate with a layer of pancakes on a white ceramic plate and a bottle of maple syrup sitting there. I gagged at the odor of burnt food. The sink next to me were piled with dirty dishes. There were shards of broken glass on the white tile floors. I almost stepped on them, while I was still barefoot. Solana was near an oven holding a silver metal spatula, jumping and shrieking hysterically trying to put out the flames that bloomed from the stove just a second ago. I sat at the table where the girl sat. I glared at her for a moment. The girl looked back at me and smiled.



鈥淥h hello,鈥?She said quickly, 鈥淒on鈥檛 mind my Mom, she鈥檚 very clumsy when it comes to housekeeping. As you can see, she鈥檚 not always the best cook. Although she鈥檚 very clumsy and careless, she has her moments. She鈥檚 only like this when she鈥檚 stressed out. It鈥檚 very typical for adults.Other than that she鈥檚 a great cook. Oh, I鈥檓 so sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I鈥檓 Aiyana.鈥?br>



Aiyana reached out her right hand towards me.



I looked at her hand. I wondered what she made that gesture for. I continued to stare at it.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name鈥?She asked.



My eyes were drawn from her hand to her face. It鈥檚 that question again. I was gnawing my bottom lip, trying hard to remember, but it was impossible. All I could do now is give Aiyana a light shrug. Aiyana frowned.



鈥淚 tried asking her the same thing,鈥?said Solana finally finished extinguishing the flames on the stove, 鈥渂ut she wouldn鈥檛 tell me. She must be shy, let鈥檚 give her some time to relax a bit. Aiyana pumpkin, go to the living room and find the phone. I think it鈥檚 time we call her parents. And turn on the computer on your way back here, and look up something on missing children鈥?br>



Aiyana looked at her mother and nodded. She got up off her chair and left the kitchen. Now my attention is drawn to Solana, who smiled at me, placed some pancakes on the plate in front of me and said,



鈥淧lease eat some pancakes, they鈥檙e really tasty. I don鈥檛 want you to go hungry. I鈥檒l give you a fork and a glass of orange juice.鈥?br>



Solana handed me a silver metal fork, with four prongs and the flower design carved on the brown wooden handle. She also grasped the bottle of maple syrup and poured its sticky brown contents on the plate of pancakes. I looked down and stared at it.



鈥淗mm,鈥?said Solana. 鈥淚t seems that you have never tasted pancakes before. Just cut a piece off and eat it.



I looked up at Solana once more, remembering what Aiyana told me earlier, that she isn鈥檛 always the best cook. I assumed that these pancakes of hers would not taste very pleasant. I found Solana as a very kind person and the last thing I want to do is offend her. With my assumption set aside, I grabbed the fork that was previously placed on the table, Cut off a piece of the pancake and placed it into my open mouth. My bottom jaw made contact with my upper one, while moving in a clockwise position. The food was soft and tasted sugary. While eating it I had this pleasant feeling, I assumed that the pancakes would taste horrible, but it was the opposite. I looked up at Solana again and smiled. Solana smiled back at me.



In each chapter there will be a new reply. So i need your opinion on this story.



I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

You're right; it is great! :) I want to read more.



You have a lot of potential:) I love how you described everything in such detail, especially the phrase about "the flames that bloomed from the stove." Very creative and vivid use of imagery. I also like how you described the protagonist eating pancakes for the first time. You describe everything to every sense, which draws the reader into the story even more.



I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

Make sure you post the other chapters, i think it is a lovely tale up to now..........has good potential. :-)



I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

You should become a writer.



I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

Oh my! I think that this story has some real potential. Very detailed! Keep those chapters coming, I want to see your progression and your style. Again very nice.



I wrote a story, and I wanna know what you think? It's somewhat long tho. but it's great?

You need to separate the first part into paragraphs. Way too hard to read.

Break please?

So here's my long complicated hair story. My hair is soo incredibly thick. And on top of that it's really frizzy. I hate it. And last year i cut it to my shoulders, now its about an inch and a half past my shoulders. And it's really unhealthy from dying it. I've given it a break now and it's growing a little more. But the only way I'm happy is if I straighten it, which takes about an hour and a half everyday. I need a break from that, and I want my hair to be long, wavey, and healthy like it was a couple years ago. When I try to do that I brush it the second i get out of the shower and let it air dry with some product in it. But after its dry, if I brush it, it poofs up. I just read a magazine that said I could put it into loose braids and then once its almost dry take some product and piece it out. I'm doubting that. So, is there anything more or anything else I can do to that it dries a little bit shinier and I can piece out in wavey strands with some product?



Break please?

yah.

How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

Do the following Guidelines for US food products tarnish their diets?



BROCCOLI, FROZEN Insects and mites



(AOAC 945.82) Average of 60 or more aphids and/or thrips per 100 grams



CINNAMON



Rodent filth



(AOAC 968.38b) Average of 11 or more rodent hairs per 50 grams



CHERRIES



Insect filth



(MPM-V48) Average of 4% or more pieces are rejects due to insects other than maggots



DEFECT SOURCE: Insect reject - Pre-harvest and/or post harvest insect infestation, Rot reject - pre-harvest mold infection



CHOCOLATE AND CHOCOLATE LIQUOR Insect filth



(AOAC 965.38) Average is 60 or more insect fragments per 100 grams when 6 100-gram subsamples are examined



OR



Any 1 subsample contains 90 or more insect fragments



Rodent filth



(AOAC 965.38) Average is 1 or more rodent hairs per 100 grams in 6 100-gram subsamples examined



OR



Any 1 subsample contains 3 or more rodent hairs



USFDA HANDBOOK:



http://vm.cfsan.fda.gov/~dms/dalbook.htm...



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

I agree!! People should eat what they want and not be preached at. I quit eating meat about three weeks ago when I saw how poorly animals are treated. My conscience wont let me eat meat again. I wont have any part of it!! But I wouldn't dare try to tell you or anyone else not to eat meat either. It's all about choices. I have a hard time trusting the government any more. They wont tell us the truth about anything because they don't think we can handle it. I would like to start growing my own food so that I know what I'm eating!!



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

All I can say is that I'll stick with my meat products



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

i eat meat..... sorry.



and i carry around LV purses



hate all you want but, I %26lt;3 LV!!! anddd chicken



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

Oh, that's just gross! Thanks a lot-- I'm NEVER eating again!



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

eewww...



oh, well...protein is necessary in any diet, right?!



%26amp; forget the vegetarian/vegan factor...that stuff is nasty for anyone!!



I WASH what I can %26amp; will (once again...thanks!) have to 'block out' the rest of the info so I don't starve or have to force-feed myself chocolate!)



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

Yep, it's all a matter of opinion.



Don't let them see that report!



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

Also, every time you take a shower or go to the toilet you kill billions and billions of innocent creatures living in or on you ... murderers!



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

Well if you eat broc.. you will be gettin your meat all in one.. I like my meat and veggies..So i guess i have twice the meat when i eat my beef burger.. Who gives a crap anyway.. i say PHOOEY..



How purely VEGAN or VEGETARIAN can such folks consider themselves?

I've often wondered this myself John Right On!!



I couldn't be a vegetarian if I tried. But I do eat organic meats whenever possible.



Vegetarian: Indian word for BAD hunter.



heh heh



Peace and a big, fat juicy steak to YOU!!



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Please Rate my story and tell me how I can improve!!!!?

"My eyes opened and I realized I was resting on a soft bed. I was covered with a soft baby blue blanket. The birds chirped rhythmically, and the sunlight reflected from the window adjacent from the bed was hurting my eyes. I squinted as I looked upon it, but it really didn't help relieve the pain at all. The pain felt as if I was looking directly at a flashlight. I could easily tell the time of day was morning. I sat up looked around the bedroom, the walls were painted pink, the drawers and bookshelves standing opposite of the window were just as blue as the blanket that I had just pulled off. The room was unfamiliar to me. I wondered how I got here. I could not recall anything that occurred before this present point, nothing at all.



I got out of bed and there was a sound coming from the polished wooden floor. I looked down and saw a silver heart shaped pendant bonded with thin silver chains. I bent over and picked up the locket. It was the size of my thumb, and it shined like precious diamonds in the sunlight behind me. I turned the heart shaped locket and saw a small clasp. I opened the locket and saw a photo of a young woman on the left who seemed to be wearing a purple dress robe. Next to her on the right was a little girl, wearing similar clothing except she wore pink instead of purple. Both of them had long black hair and they were smiling at each other. I glanced at the little girl again, and although the child seemed so cute, she also seemed very familiar. There was a mirror next to the door in between the drawer and the bookshelves. I saw my own reflection in the mirror. I realized that I had black hair just like the two people in the photo, wearing a white T-Shirt and white shorts. I also saw in the mirror that I had no shoes on. Then I looked at the little girl in the picture again. That little girl鈥檚 face and hair are somewhat similar to mine. On the left side of the locket I saw a something printed on the silver metal. The upper left corners of the heart locket were two letters engraved 鈥淟.R鈥?printed on small letters and in the middle of the heart, there was date carved into the locket that said:



20 December 1995



The date on the locket caught my attention. I wondered why the date was even printed there. What happened on that day? Why was it so significant? I also wondered who the young woman is in the photo, and if I was the little girl in the photo. There was a knock on the door, and I almost jumped when I heard it. I watched the door, and remained alert, until seconds later, the door opened. The one who knocked on the door was a young woman, wearing a white dress and I also noticed a white apron she was wearing that seemed to blend in. Her rectangular glasses were completely crooked, it looks as if it was about to fall off her face. Her face was completely dirty, and her crimson hair looked as if it were never brushed for weeks perhaps months. Her emerald eyes came into contact with mine, and said to me in a somewhat timid voice.



鈥淗ello, you鈥檙e awake鈥?br>



I continued to stare at her, and said nothing.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name?鈥?said the woman, smiling lightly 鈥淢y name is Solana Frosty.鈥?br>



Unfortunately I didn鈥檛 have an answer to that question. I felt pretty stupid not knowing my own name, so I remained silent and continued to gaze at her.



鈥淯m, you don鈥檛 talk much do you?鈥?said Solana, timidly. 鈥淢y daughter Aiyana found you in the forest out cold so we took you in our home and we kept you warm and placed you in her room. Um鈥?. Are you feeling okay?鈥?br>



I nodded lightly, and whispered.



鈥淵es鈥?br>



鈥淚鈥檓 glad to hear it!鈥?said Solana, smiling brightly. 鈥淐ome downstairs, I made some breakfast. When you finished eating we can call your parents. How old are you by the way?鈥?br>



鈥淭-Tw-Twelve鈥?I answered a little unsure of myself.



鈥淥h that鈥檚 great!鈥?Said Solana insecurely 鈥淎iyana is just about you age- Well, perhaps. She鈥檒l be turning twelve in a few days, so I鈥檓 sure you two would get along just fine. Now please come downstairs for some breakfast. I didn鈥檛 expect you to be awake at this time. After breakfast we鈥檒l call your parents, they must be worried sick about you. So we鈥檒l just let them know that you鈥檙e okay鈥?br>



Solana turned around and left. Seconds later, I got up off the floor, where I was sitting, left the room and went down the stairs. After I reached the first floor, I heard a voice calling to me.



鈥淗ey, come over here! Come in the kitchen鈥?br>



I turned to where the voice is coming from. It was Solana and another girl who had long scarlet hair just like Solana鈥檚 in a kitchen. I walked inside the kitchen where the girl sat at a circular wooden table that was near a corner of the kitchen. The table had a large plate with a layer of pancakes on a plate and a bottle of maple syrup sitting there. I gagged at the odor of burnt food. The sink next to me was piled with dirty dishes. There were shards of broken glass on the white tile floors. I almost stepped on them, while I was still barefoot. Solana was near an oven holding a silver metal spatula, jumping and shrieking hysterically trying to put out the flames that bloomed from the stove just a second ago. I sat at the table where the girl sat. I gazed at her for a moment. The girl looked back at me and grinned.



鈥淥h hello,鈥?She said quickly, 鈥淒on鈥檛 mind my Mom, she鈥檚 very clumsy when it comes to housekeeping. As you can see, she鈥檚 not always the best cook. Although she鈥檚 very clumsy and careless, she has her moments. She鈥檚 only like this when she鈥檚 stressed out. It鈥檚 very typical for adults. Other than that she鈥檚 a great cook. Oh, I鈥檓 so sorry, I forgot to introduce myself. I鈥檓 Aiyana.鈥?br>



Aiyana reached out her right hand towards me.



I looked at her hand. I wondered what she made that gesture for. I continued to stare at it.



鈥淲hat鈥檚 your name鈥?She asked.



My eyes were drawn from her hand to her face. It鈥檚 that question again. I was gnawing my bottom lip, trying hard to remember, but it was impossible. I gave Aiyana a light shrug. Aiyana frowned.



鈥淚 tried asking her the same thing,鈥?said Solana finally finished extinguishing the flames on the stove, 鈥渂ut she wouldn鈥檛 tell me. She must be shy, let鈥檚 give her some time to relax a bit. Aiyana pumpkin, go to the living room and find the phone. I think it鈥檚 time we call her parents. And turn on the computer on your way back here, and look up something on missing children鈥?br>



Aiyana looked at her mother and nodded. She got up off her chair and left the kitchen. Now my attention is drawn to Solana, who smiled at me, placed some pancakes on the plate in front of me and said,



鈥淧lease eat some pancakes, they鈥檙e really tasty. I don鈥檛 want you to go hungry. I鈥檒l give you a fork and a glass of orange juice.鈥?br>



Solana handed me a silver metal fork. She also grasped the bottle of maple syrup and poured its sticky brown contents on the plate of pancakes. I looked down to examine them.



鈥淗mm,鈥?said Solana. 鈥淚t seems that you have never tasted pancakes before. Just cut a piece off and eat it.鈥?



I looked up at Solana once more, remembering what Aiyana told me earlier, that she isn鈥檛 always the best cook. I assumed that these pancakes of hers would not taste very pleasant. I thought of Solana as a very kind person and the last thing I wanted to do is offend her. With my assumption set aside, I grabbed the fork. I cut off a piece of the pancake and placed it into my open mouth. I chewed slowly to. The food was soft and tasted sugary. While eating it I had this pleasant feeling, I assumed that the pancakes would taste horrible, but it was the opposite. I looked up at Solana again and smiled. Solana smiled back at me.



鈥淚鈥檓 glad you like it鈥?She said sweetly. 鈥淲ould you like some orange juice? You鈥檒l like this one, very natural.



Solana went to the refrigerator at the other side of the kitchen. She opened the door on the right. Reached in and pulled out a pitcher of some kind of yellowish substance, then she closed the door and placed the pitcher on the counter. She reached for the cupboard next to refrigerator for a clear glass cup. She took a cup from the cupboard and placed it on the counter as well. She poured the orange juice from the pitcher into the glass cup, and handed it to me. I looked into the cup of orange juice and saw something lumpy, there seems to be some foreign material inside.



鈥淥h don鈥檛 worry about the stuff in there,鈥?said Solana sweetly 鈥淭hat鈥檚 just the pulp, dear. It鈥檚 natural orange juice. The pulp happens to be very healthy. Go on just drink it!鈥?br>



I took a small sip of orange juice, despite the uncomfortable pulp rushing into my lips. It tasted pretty good.



Aiyana has just arrived in the kitchen holding a white cordless phone and handed it to me. I looked down at the phone, then who looked up at Solana, who nodded. I looked down at the phone again and pushed the green call button. There was a loud dial tone. I remained still trying to decide what button to press. The left side of my head ached. Random thoughts swirled into my head. I shut off the phone and placed it on the table. Aiyana and Solana exchanged looks, and then looked at me again.



鈥淓rm鈥︹€?said Solana nervously, 鈥淵ou don鈥檛 know your parents鈥?phone number?鈥?br> I shook my head lightly. Solana frowned.



鈥淯m鈥?okay鈥?she said, 鈥淲hat about parent last name?鈥?br>



I shrugged. Solana sighed.



鈥淲ow,鈥?said Aiyana, quickly, 鈥測ou must not remember anything at all. Mom I think she has amnesia鈥?



I looked down at my feet and sighed. My entire face contracted and I clenched my fists firmly as if I was squeezing something. I took three slow deep breaths. Solana kneeled down next to me. I looked at her then she smiled sweetly.



鈥淥h, No worries,鈥?She said kindheartedly, 鈥測ou will get you memories back soon. You can stay with us if you鈥檇 like, if it鈥檚 okay with Aiyana, you can sleep in her room. Aiyana, take this girl to the office upstairs. You are going to the missing child registry. You are not to go on any other site. We are doing this to help her find her parents and pick up any information about her., not shop for 鈥渃ute boys鈥?on the internet. Do I make myself clear, young lady?鈥?br> Aiyana鈥檚 face turned red.



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I really like your story and would not change a thing but would love to know what happens to miss rosewood in the end.



good title would be BLUE DECEMBER.



The blanket was blue and the date in the locket



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Title: Lost but not Forgotten



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your story is good so far... i'd like to know how it ends ^_^